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sunsight 2008-2-25 14:34

3月就要考试了,作文写出来还怪怪的,请各位高人指点啊!!急!

[b][size=3]Do you agree of disagree with the following statement?[/size][/b]
[b][size=3]Subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education[/size][/b]
[size=3]There is a public discussion nowadays on the issue that subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every childe’s basic education. Those who object to this issue believe that children need enough time to play and it’s benefit for children tolearn from games. However pople who favour these subjects as me,on the other hand, maintan that these subjects learned as a basic education play an essential role to the development of children.[/size]
[size=3]Perhaps the primary reason is that parents and teachers can’t find the children’s gift and interests in certain area without showing them the brief knowledge of that subject. Children like the white papers, before they choose the color which they want to use in their own paper, we need to give them color firstly. In this sense, setting the chance for children to approach various subjects is important. So we can’t give up the subjects such as art, music, and drama as a part of every child’s basic education.[/size]
[size=3]Also contributing to my point is that children have enough time to take these subjects. With the rapid developing of our society, teenagers and adults often need to face the heavy load of studying and working. They had to pay more attention to their own specialization and protecting the relationship of their relatives and friends. Neverthless, the kids needn’t do those complicated things. Their parents would support them to fulfill their dreams with money and help them to get along well with others. That means children can concentrate on the subjects of arts, music, and drama and learn them better.[/size]
[size=3]Besides, the ability of creation and amazing memory often lead children to learn arts, musics and drama succecefully and quickly. It’s the best time for a people to learn new knowledge when they are children. [/size]
[size=3]To sum up, childe’s basic education should contain the subjects of art,music, drama and so on. History has prooved this opinion such as musician L.vanLudwig Van Beethoven touched the music at 4 age. Various subjects for kids can enlighten them about kinds of matters in human’s life and edify them to find their interests. [/size]

nolihead 2008-2-25 17:51

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sunsight 2008-2-25 21:16

谢谢哦!偶努力改帖~~~
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