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“临行”前的一篇了·····大家给个面子

50. Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.  


Though many people who still prefer to do the work that they already do well claim that this will ensure their efficiency and preventing them from going wrong, in my opinion, taking adventures and always trying something new carry more weight than just sticking to the things you are capable of.

The main reason lies on the fact that people who dare to pursue his or her dream by taking and working on fresh and creative ideas or methods will often receive a surprisingly fabulous result. As a matter of fact, trying to expand your comfort zone is a critical way to learn new skills and thus helps you to brainstorm in another way that you may have never known before. So no matter whether you succeed or not in the end,  you at least learn more about something and that could possibly change your future life.

Adding more excitement to your life also provides an adequate reason for my opinion. If anyone loves adventuring and challenging activities like me,  you probably will agree with me that those exciting and risking moments one has ever experienced bring to his later life a lot memories of fun or even something more.

As for myself, I have such experience during my travel in Thailand. We had a chance bungee jumping from 50 meters high there in an island. Everyone was excited and a bit scarey including me, who actually dreamed of this all the time but never ever challenged in the past. Then at that time, there appeard to be a strong strength which seemed to keep pushing me give a try, so I became the first one to bungee. It was so fabulous that I, soaring as a bird in the sky, screamed, laughed, and shouted loudly. That feeling of freedom as well as excitement and relaxation became indelible in my memory.

Finally,  trying new things will certainly offer us more opportunities to meet new people and make new friends as well. And isn't it perfect for our life?

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[[i] 本帖最后由 Tiramisuforever 于 2008-2-22 12:22 编辑 [/i]]

呵呵·····用D是“IBT作文独立部分软件”（完全就是ETS官方专用D啊······）
专业专业（其实也今天才发现>-<）····下载[url]http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/thread-3967-1-1.html[/url]
绝对D顶······

临行了还要提高速度啊啊····:Q 否则对于偶来说没时间检查就挂挂鸟·········
阿门···············

天啊············偶先············承认错误
发后偶就那么回头扫一眼，就看到第一行应该改成“Prevent them from"......
那我还是先不要再‘回’了
带着****D精神睡去了*******

啊啊啊我刚才改完一篇才“飘飘”D看到坛子里改作文的规定....
“年少无知”了·······:loveliness: （不好意西·····）

偶改D两篇：
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虾们，小女马上临行（刑···）了大家走过路过的还是给个面子······
谢···········

谢谢你帮我改作文，回头看你这一篇哈:handshake ~

在看之前，先试着写了一下我可能用的开头~
Jane Goodall, a scientist who devotes her life to wildlife conservation, once said, 'Keeping on exploring for unknown things is the main difference between human being and animals.' Some people prefer to do things that they have already done well, while others vote for trying new things which is almost like an adventure. Considerable though the advantages that repeating one's old behavior enjoys are, they can not compete the benefits that exploring an new field brings about, when dream chasing, interest finding and human serving are taken in to account.

[[i] 本帖最后由 招财猫加油 于 2008-2-22 16:27 编辑 [/i]]

最后一段好像少了点

财猫U的例子（包括名人名言·····）总这么多啊啊······佩服佩服
自己是先很不习惯写例子:loveliness: 呵~~~

LS偶时间确实不够了5555不过觉得还能混~··
看了ZHY的《10天搞定T作文》就浅学点“问句结尾回味型”~~~：）

对不起楼主这么晚才把修改登上来。。。
第一段， ...that this will ensure their efficiency and prevent(preventing) them from going wrong . and 前后都受will 制约吧
第二段里面 那个surprisingly fabulous result 是不是语义有点点重复呢？ “惊人的意外结果”中文讲得通，不知道可不可以这样用，不过ＬＺ的用词精神值得我学习～
第三段那个　for my opinion 我觉得应该是from my opinion
      or the something more 有点多余的说
      第三是总分结构，要是最后再点下题会不会更好些。Thanks to bungee, I not only gained the unique experience, but also realize that trying new things is fantastic.