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求各位高手给我改改作文吧

[size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]With the rapid advancement of the science and technology, the innovation and revolution of our modern society happen every day. Numerous new inventions and thoughts are arousing people’s interests and curiosity. A general investigation conducted by book sellers demonstrates that by comparison with 1960s people who buy the classical works and historic fictions has decreased from 63 percent to 27 percent. This statistics reveal that people are no longer eager for learning about the history. There’s a public controversy nowadays over the question that whether learning about the past is important for the people live in the present. As far as I concern, people should not give up learning history, for one thing, nothing is more essential than the memory and experience that can help us differentiating the virtues and evils clearly, for another thing, learning the history of the motherland is beneficial for the teenagers to become the valuable and responsible patriots who are willing to devote themselves to their countries.[/font][/size]
[size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]Only the past can tell us what we should do in the new situation. Without the similar practice and the experience summarized by human being live in the past, how can we predict the consequence of an event? Our society abounds with the examples that the more a person know about history, the wiser the person is. Chairman Mao is one of the greatest militarists and political leaders in Chinese long history. There is one saying that if he had not been the great military, he would be an excellent historian. The reasonable and rational strategies that he put forward during the war help Chinese beat the incredibly strong enemies and found the people’s republic of China. One of the most essential factors of his success is the experience and wisdom he got from the history. [/font][/size]
[size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]Furthermore, there is no invention which is not based on the past theories and the practice made by our ancestor. If we didn’t invent the first computer which works slowly, how can we invent the internet?
I can not agree that the inventor of the internet hadn’t learned about the working process of the original computer and some principles of the information technology researched by the people in the past at all. This sets forth the unquestionable fact that on no account can we forget the science and technology in the past. [/font][/size]
[size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]When human being enjoy the convenience, interests and new ways of life brought by the modern society, isn’t it necessary for us to give some considerations to taking some responsibilities as the citizens of our countries? If we know nothing about the glorious history of our countries, it is impossible for us to be proud of the intelligence and spirits of our ancestors. It would be certain that we would not love our country. Logically, we are not able to concentrate on working for our countries. It is a universally acknowledge that a person who even do not love his or her country, must be irresponsible. [/font][/size]
[size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]Finally, some new technology would not be always beneficial for us. Quote a common example of the harmful deeds done by the violent computer games for the teenagers. Some teenagers who are not self-discipline enough are easy to be addicted to the games and be effected by them. Therefore, games lead to the increasing percentage of the juvenile delinquents. This jeopardizes the safety of society. However, how can we relate crime with the teenagers who are keen on the classical works or the anecdotes of the famous and great historical people?[/font][/size]
[size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]It would be nature to take the view that we should learn the new technology and enjoy the new ways of life. But it would be absurd to claim that only learning the new technology and accepting the new culture are necessary, it would be more absurd believe that learning about the past has no value. From what we has been discussed above, we could safely arrive at the conclusion that it’s valuable for us to learn about the past.[/font][/size]
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也不知道能得几分，我很没信心，写的也慢，不知道能不能写完呢

高手们，给我指点，给我明灯呀。。。:(

等着

我就跟这等着了
你们不理我我就长到这

我先吃个饭，马上回来

请理我。。。。

As far as I concern, people should not give up learning history, for one thing, nothing is more essential than the memory and experience that can help us differentiating the virtues and evils clearly, for another thing, learning the history of the motherland is beneficial for the teenagers to become the valuable and responsible patriots who are willing to devote themselves to their countries。。

这个句子的语法很多的错误啊。文章题目是什么啊

considering history, comprehending history  and  talking history  has  been usual for our daily life.
history is a  show "real life is the only life in sepecified times".  
no matter  fantastic and intereting history ,我要上课了，下个来一起写啊

have been

when we read an artical adapted from  a book like chicken soup for the soul , preferable  story  not  only tells us the knowledge about   the person's family , education  and career but also includes  the reasons and principles.


for example ,Darwin, father of the theory of evilution ,gave up  a medical career and was told by his father :"you care for nothing but shooting and catching "........................................................


哈哈，这个思路对吗？

题目

题目是说学习历史对现在的人是不没有价值

能否指正？

人世间最悲惨的事不是语法错误，而是有了看不出来

没事，也是很好的例子，可以用在别的地方么

it's too difficult to use the good example in every  topic,i think.

把你写的第一篇作文题目也一起列出来呗