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蓝三角（1.3） ---家庭作业

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Vo UK k(dA+e6` [[i] 本帖最后由 秋姐 于 2008-3-19 10:44 编辑 [/i]]

秋姐辛苦了
&a%bw;X,i,^b u 我没做作业是因为。。。唉，没带蓝三角回家去9Jbu|8`,m!Rh+J
报告完毕！
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&^s;?cs.i&a 我才看了下第1个段子，录了音，有点赶，我录了三遍才在60秒之内完成
O)Nm(Nw4r$po3D 还是读的，没有呃。。嗯。。well...you know 之类的话，都抢火一样才说完，我把它传上来了8@(|{:e{?
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p_3w gPo#bF!{0`DA 但是，这样又不太好写提纲。
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[[i] 本帖最后由 ecarolfly 于 2008-2-17 19:57 编辑 [/i]]

写啊，练啊， 这个不嫌多。慢慢就形成内在的逻辑，自己的语言和说话风格了，像说母语一样。
i0}*|n#@7Z`#Bo 另外，我的sample answer 一般保证8句话，而且长短句分配有致，同时我的语速也可以保证在规定时间内完成。尽管有些同学认为稍快，但自然。.K9d/ET:f4qZA
我在这里仅提供一个借鉴，如果你的中常语速实在不能上调的话，可以适当缩减句子量，按照自己的方式再备一个。

多谢啦，秋姐~
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再加上考试的时候肯定磕巴。。估计还得减几句话。自己去多写，多练吧

此帖的音频 秋姐 是不是编辑丢啦？

不是。 因为是家庭作业，要求同学们自己录。2RET]$xge)^
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