lifei008 2008-1-30 00:02
求助一句话，谢谢拉，哈
According to the latest investigation, it can be learned that approximately as many as 85 percent youth living in our hometown complain that they just cannot find an appropriate place to do exercise.
请问我这句话这样写有问题吗，就是想表达大约有将近多少多少这样子，用approximately as many as 可以吗
小马元勋 2008-1-30 00:45
approximately 和as many as有点矛盾
一个是表示大概，一个有点肯定味道
另外句子太长，最好中间加些标点，不加的话给人种窒息的感觉
lifei008 2008-1-30 01:07
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这样啊，谢谢版主啊，
还有我想问下，我想表达我们应该考虑年轻人闲暇时的生活，这样写：
give some consideration to their life(lives) in leisure time
我改用life 还是lives 呢，我查词典，说的是表示生活时，既可数又不可数。我就晕拉
fistandan 2008-2-3 12:10
闲暇时的生活直接译成life in the leisure time是不是有点chinenglish啊...
可以换成 recreation in the leisure time :)
