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[size=3][font=Times New Roman]听说要先改别人的，可为什么这里一篇习作都没有，改谁的啊？？还是先请改改我的吧呵呵[/font][/size]
[size=3][font=Times New Roman]Do you agree with the following statement: Getting university education is the most important factor for success in life.(07[/font][font=宋体]年[/font][font=Times New Roman]5[/font][font=宋体]月[/font][font=Times New Roman]12[/font][font=宋体]北美作文考题[/font][font=Times New Roman]) [/font][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Nowadays, competition in society is more and more tense, people are inclined to take a deeper education in universities for the case of having more opportunities to win in the competitions. But whether the university education is the prominent element for success in life or not? In my point of view, considering the practical knowledge people learn in university, I concede that university education is important to the success. However, it would never be the critical one which can determine win or lose.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Admittedly, university education is a way for people to become more erudite and self-confident. The things learned on campus make people know better about the field of their majors. And the experiment classes provide people chance to apply the principles printed in books into practice which mimic almost a true society for them to train themselves without being afraid of making mistakes. Before they graduate, they has master almost all basic backups to encourage them face the challenge in society bravely.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]However, having university education does not mean success in the future, that is to say, university education is not the determined element for the success in career. For example, almost every year there are reports in the newspaper that some student graduated from the top university of China committed suicide. What has the high education brings to them? Undoubtedly abundant knowledge in the major, but at the same time, they failed to learn the basic living principle, such as how to handle stress, how to get along with others and so on. [/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]What is more, some people who is successful in career did not accept such education. The most convinced example must be Bill Gates, who dropped out from Harvard University, the best one in the world, when he was in grade two. If the education is critical for success, Gates would be sustaining starving and waiting for alms from the government. Paradoxically, he not only won but also won a big success which astounded the world with his effort, intelligence and the spirit that never be afraid of being lose. That means, people can achieve accomplishment even they do not have high education in university.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]In a word, whether a person can succeed do not depend the education. As long as the person thinks actively and is willing to pay great effort, he or she would get achievement not matter he or she has the education of university or not.[/size][/font]

space travel(integrate writing)

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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]In the lecture, the professor casts question on the private space tourism planning which in the reading passage is said to have many benefits to both development of science and individuals. [/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Firstly, according to the professor, the cost of private space travel would make the making of spaceflight much more expensive instead of cheaper as the reading claims. Since people are expected in the spaceflight, the safety is a significant element and the spaceflight should be test and retest which would undoubtedly increase the cost.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Secondly, the professor points out that the private travel would prevent discovery because the action would make the travel more commercial and so the scientific discoveries would suffer seriously. This contradicts with the reading which says the privatization of space travel would shorten the time for new discoveries.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Finally, though the reading claims that the tax would fall down because the tickets fee would support part of the project, the fact is that, according to the professor, the burden on taxpayers would definitely go heavier than before thanks to the requirement of building space station and things like this to allow people take space travel.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]In a word, the lecture given by the professor questions the opinion in the reading and points out problems that the reading fails to talk about.[/size][/font]

[size=3][font=宋体]政府更应支持艺术而不是[/font][font=Times New Roman]Olympic Game[/font][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Every time when it comes to the fund of government, there are always many disput[color=red]at[/color]ions on its investment, such as art and Olympic Game, which were thought to have no confliction with each other. Some people especially who love arts insist that government should give more support on art instead of Olympic game. Considering art is one of the important elements that affect human in large scale, I concede that government should never neglect the development of art. However, in government should keep a balance between art and Olympic instead of inclining to either side. [/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Admittedly, a nation without art dooms to extinction. Art acts as a role of galvanize people's spirit and unit people together to fight for the shared aim. Considering the national song, which can impulse people fight for the revolution of the country and guide the nation at the expense of life; considering Martin Luther King's spe[color=red]e[/color]ch 'I have a dream', which make blood in the body become boiling; Considering Eis[color=red]e[/color]nhower's determined order, 'Chins up!'. All of them are art which keep people unite together and make progress.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]However, what if there is no ethical movement and leave art alone? Can the nation be [color=red]prospering[/color]? Imagine the people all over the country are all in bad health condition, what can they do besides thinking of the motivate slogans in mind? None of them can carry the gun to guide the nation; none of them can give an exciting speech through the country; none of them can follow general to drive away the invad[color=red]e[/color]rs. Obviously, art can not work without the support of the practice of [color=red]athletics[/color] such as Olympic game.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Even in the peace time, Olympic Game has its indispensable role which connects countries all over the world more and more tightly and contributes to the establishment of friendship between them. Considering the slogans of the games in history, all of them call for a harmon[color=red]i[/color]ous world in which every country can have a better development. And the spirit of Olympic Game has affected one after one generation who would like to devote themselves to a peaceful world. What is more, realities have demonstrated its affection. When the d[color=red]i[/color]saster happened in India, many countries do their favor to the local people to avoid st[color=red]arvation[/color], cure disease, and reconstruct homes. Olympic spirit has influenced people and spread all over the world.[/size][/font]


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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]In a word, without art, the nation can not survive; without Olympic, not the nation, but also the world may be chaos. None of them can be neglected.[/size][/font]

:( 为什么这么多人看了却都不改一下呢

不知道怎么改聂~因该有达人过来才是.

不知道怎么改的~~~