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【转帖】真题作文实例 作文28分

[size=2]本人RLSW分别29262628 109。为了说明托福作文的简易写法，特写此文[/size]
[size=2]对于大牛不合适，对于初学本人认为特合适！[size=0px]  x/ E6 e[/size][/size]
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[size=0px][size=1][color=black][size=9pt][font=宋体]我写作文当然用模板！我原来考了[/font]GRE[/size][/color][color=black][size=9pt]，作文[/size][size=9pt]4.5[/size][size=9pt]，感觉还行吧。所以托福作文没怎么看，直接把[/size][size=9pt]gre[/size][size=9pt]的方法拿来用。当时写的字数很少，只有[/size][size=9pt]350[/size][size=9pt]字。[/size]:[/color][/size][/size]
[size=1][size=9pt][font=宋体]文章模板非常简单，就是[/font]
开头[/size][size=9pt]+[/size][size=9pt]三点原因[/size][size=9pt]+[/size][size=9pt]结尾（就是开头），不论是[/size][size=9pt]G[/size][size=9pt]还是[/size][size=9pt]T[/size][size=9pt]，百试不爽。[/size][size=9pt][/size]
[size=9pt]就拿考试作文来说吧，我说说写的方法，尽量回忆接近原作：[/size][size=9pt][/size]
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[size=1][size=3][font=宋体]题目：该不该关心国际时事？[/font][/size][size=0px]! [/size][/size]
[size=1][size=3][font=宋体]我心中的第一想法：去他妈的，跟我有嘛关系？（真的是第一想法，有些粗俗，一闪而过）第二找原因，一般凑出来三条：[/font][font=Times New Roman]a.[/font][font=宋体]国际时事要大量背景知识，咱没这些知识[/font][/size][size=0px]0 v([/size][/size]
[size=1][size=3][font=Times New Roman]b.[/font][font=宋体]看这些事实需大量时间，咱没时间[/font][/size][size=0px]2 [/size][/size]
[size=1][size=3][font=Times New Roman]c. [/font][font=宋体]咱听到国际时事基本都不是嘛好事，让咱不爽[/font][/size][/size]
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[size=1][font=宋体][size=3]接下来就要写了，我一步一步写：
[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=3]第一步：[/size][/font][size=0px]% [/size][/size]
[size=1][font=Times New Roman][size=3]Whether we should pay attention to global events, different people will have different ideas due to their [/size][/font][/size]
[size=1][font=Times New Roman][size=3]background. As for me I strongly disagree with the idea and the reasons are as follows.
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Firstly, to analyse global events needs lot’s of background knowledge that is too much for us. In short it is not possible for us to understand the events.[/size][/font][size=0px]$ [[/size][/size]
[size=1][font=Times New Roman][size=3]Secondly, it is so great a task to read news papers and webpages to get the global events that cost too much time. In conclusion to pay attention to global events is too time consuming a task for us.[/size][/font][size=0px]/ F[/size][/size]
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[size=1][font=Times New Roman][size=3]Last but not least, most global events that come to us are unhappy things. So we should not make us unpleasent by learning the global events.[/size][/font][size=0px]' [/size][/size]
[size=1][font=Times New Roman][size=3]In conclusion, we should not pay attention to global events. It needs too much knowledge that we don’t have, and it is time costing. Also global events always make us unhappy.[/size][/font][/size]
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[font=宋体]看出来了吗？模板就是[/font][font=Tahoma][size=0px]7 [/size][/font]
[font=宋体]开头：问题点明[/font][font=Times New Roman]+[/font][font=宋体]废话[/font][font=Times New Roman]+[/font][font=宋体]自己想法[/font][size=0px]4 r# j[/size]
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Firstly[font=宋体]，原因一开头中心句。原因一结尾总结句。[/font]
[size=3][font=Times New Roman]Secondly[/font][font=宋体]，原因二开头中心句。原因二结尾总结句。[/font][/size]
Last but not least[font=宋体]，原因三开头中心句。原因三结尾总结句。[/font]

[font=宋体]结尾：自己想法[/font][font=Times New Roman]+[/font][font=宋体]三点原因的中心句[/font]
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[font=宋体]在屏幕上打出这些字应该用掉三分之一的时间了，剩下时间给每段写例子。[/font]
[font=宋体]第二步：
[font=Times New Roman]Whether we should pay attention to global events, different people will have different ideas due to their [/font][/font]
[font=宋体][font=Times New Roman]background. As for me I strongly disagree with the idea and the reasons are as follows.[/font][size=0px]% _# E; b[/size][/font]
Firstly, to analyse global events needs lot’s of background knowledge that is too much for us.[color=red] Take the middle east war as an example. Those countries fight each other because comples reasons, and[size=0px]" f( m [/size][/color]
[color=#ff0000]event these reasons are related to too much background knowledge we don’t know. So it is impossible for us to understand the war, and to know these events is not meaningful. [font=宋体]这再来了例子，仿照上面，谢谢某国选举，咱看了也一头雾水。[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman] In short it is not possible for us to understand the events.[/font]
Secondly, it is so great a task to read news papers and webpages to get the global events that cost too much time. [color=red]
Most of us are busy every day, and time is precious. However there are countless news every day, so how is it [/color]
[color=red]possible for us to choose and read the global events? A good example is the news [/color][color=red]webpages. You will feel crazy when you see the pages full of news. To read the new swill waste our time [/color][color=red]because we have something more [/color]
[color=red]important to do.[/color] In conclusion to pay attention to global events is too time consuming a task for us.
Last but not least, most global events that come to us are unhappy things. [color=red]It seems that people are more [/color]
[color=red]interested in news of dark side, so nowadays medias are filled with bad news. For instance whenever I turn on [/color]
[color=red]the TV, most news are unhappy ones, such as terrorism, earthquake, murder, disaster and so on. They all make me feel sad, and influeced my studying effeciency or even make me amnesea.[/color]So we should not make us
unpleasent by learning the global events.
In conclusion, we should not pay attention to global events. It needs too much knowledge that we don’t have, and it is time costing. Also global events always make us unhappy.[size=0px]0 p[/size]
[font=宋体]这就是我的作文，[/font][font=Times New Roman]350[/font][font=宋体]字，红色部分是补充的。写这些，连想带输入大概[/font][font=Times New Roman]17[/font][font=宋体]分钟，剩下时间检查一下。[/font]

[font=宋体]本人感觉这样写是比较有效率且安全的，首先，写例子时折断的前后两句始终提醒你不会跑题；第二，三段写下来长短大致相同，不会出现不平衡；第三，就算出现时间不够，也不会说是没有文章结尾而导致严重结构问题。[/font]

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我先顶一下吧!觉得挺有用!谢谢!
还有一个月就考了!写作还么没怎么开始弄!本人高一!词汇量大概5000左右!试问斑竹:这种情况还有戏吗?我很着急!都想放弃了!:Q

我觉得没有什么不可能的
你不是问别人自己有没有戏
关键是去做!

怎么看都像是史禺老师的学生啊~！last but not least!怎么看怎么亲切~！

阿？这算不算掺有政治色彩的文章啊，托福还会出这种题啊！

嘿嘿 不错 可以应急用呀~

last but not least!


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恩...不错...原来把每段中心句先写出来效率回高很多啊...

死鱼的风格。。。

This artical is well organized and concrete.

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这篇作文得了28分吗？

of course~

呵呵，偶27号要考托了，谢谢楼主给偶提供了一个新的好思路啊，因为之前；一直属于文章写得好的时候就要超时，计时写完的就干瘪无味，打字速度也一直有点跟不上思路~~

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提快打字速度！

很使用的方法!
谢了~~~~

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还有 这篇 没有得28分    因为  综合  他肯定很好