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[size=4]A few days ago, a report revealed by a newspaper showed that more and more parks were to be built because an increasing number of people are fond of spending spare time outdoors. Recently, a debate has been raised over that it is of benefits for people to be out doors for their leisure activities. Those people who oppose this statement argue that it is noisy and disturbing to do outdoor activities. However, other people, including me, prefer doing leisure activities outdoors. As far as I am concerned, the significance of outdoor activities to a person can never be exaggerated. [/size][size=4]
Advantages that spending time outside enjoys are remarkable when the health it brings to people, especially the old, are taken into consideration. People will strengthen their body when they do exercise in vast outdoor spaces, such as parks or playground. Take my grandmother for example. My grandma, who is sixty-five years old, regularly spends two hours a day playing in the park nearby which offers free sports equipment. As a result, she stays so healthy now that she can continuously climb to the peak of a high mountain without a rest.
The other valuable point of doing leisure activities outdoors is that people can make large number of friends there. Personal experience leads to conclude that people are likely to make more friends when they spend their spare time outdoors than indoors. I favor to play sports outside my home in a playground nearby. Consequently, I have built up good friendship with those people who I often play with. Last month, I had to lie on the bed, for I carelessly injured my leg. However, what I did not expected is that busy as those people are, they came to see me. Certainly, I was really comforted by their solicitudes.
Disadvantages claimed by those people who object my opinion are that there are loud noises outdoors and people are easily to get interrupted by others. According to the study conducted by scientists, the noises outside home are three times as loud as that inside home. And furthermore, staying outdoors can be disturbed by people who spend spare time there. For instance, some people who happen to be in bad mood may be asked to take part in games when they want to be left alone.
Though the disadvantages playing outdoors has are perceivable, they can be ignored when the advantages are taken into consideration. By doing activities outside home, people can conspicuously develop their physical conditions. Moreover, people who often stay outdoors will probably make more friends who are able to offer lots of help. Taking into account all the factors discussed above, we could draw the conclusion that it is better for people to spend leisure time doing outdoor activities rather than stay home.
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