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乐极生悲，否极泰来写作贴

应落落，开个作文贴凑热闹
换了个界面，还有点不习惯:lol
[b][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]【[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]6[/size][/font][/b][b][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]】[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]TOPIC #010:[/size][/font][/b]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? [/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总分总结构：[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总：原文（many people attribute success to luck,but i agree with the quotation that...,i ascribe my decision to reasons elucidated as follows)专家（...it takes non-stop and painful efforts to succeed ,relying on goddness will get you nowhere at all)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第一分：原文（each of us has our goals for which we continuely strive.when we reach the goal ,we call it success,so the success is end product of long-term efforts.for ex,)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（success is the result of long-term efforts.everybody has his goals.only when the goals are realized can we feel successful.but it's impossible without 100percent of efforts.for ex)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第二分：（another ex,an athlete prepare for an event.he can not depend on luck,he has to..if it were true that .but that is not what occurs in reality.only hard work and efforts can bring success.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（luck is not reliable.anyone dreaming to realize success through luck is doomed to be fooled by fate.for ex.)the athlete can not ..luck,all he needs to do is ...if success came out of luck,he only needs to ..but that's not what occurs in reality.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总：原文（the criterion that success comes out of hard work.and a saying hard work never goes  unrewarded.[color=red]the momentary satisfaction is ascribed to those who rig it out.什么意思）[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][color=black]专家（success is sweet and lasting to those who have really strived it...so we can say for sure that success comes from hard work and luck is only coincide.hard work is necessary and unique to success.)[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家将它与第三分连在一起，赞同。[/size][/font]
[color=red][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]Hence, we can clearly say that success comes purely out of hard work and luck becomes a mere coincidence.[/size][/font][/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]如果把become换成is,原文意思就变了吗？如果想要理解成为通过luck 成功只是巧合。....and one depended on luck is a mere coincidence.[/size][/font][/size][/font][/size][/font][/color]

[[i] 本帖最后由 功夫熊猫2 于 2008-9-6 21:31 编辑 [/i]]

[color=red]get you nowhere at all什么意思？[/color]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]when the [color=red]preset once-far-away goals[/color] （[color=red]什么意思）[/color]finally [color=red][color=black]jump into our vision[/color][/color] and [color=red][color=black]within easy reach[/color] [/color]can we enjoy the happiness of success. [/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]For example, a student who fails to concentrate on studies and at the last moment tries to[color=red] [color=black]cram,[/color] [/color]hoping to [color=red][color=black]get away with it[/color],[/color] finds the result [color=red]more often than not f[/color]rustratingly unsatisfactory. [color=red]什么意思？[/color][/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]Very true is the saying that hard work never goes unrewarded. 是什么用法，倒装吗？go unrewarded 什么意思？[/size][/font][/size][/font][/size][/font]

我先支持一下·~~~加油·~~~

[quote]原帖由 [i]功夫熊猫2[/i] 于 2008-9-6 21:39 发表 [url=http://bbs.xiaoma.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=216398&ptid=20683][img]http://bbs.xiaoma.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
get you nowhere at all什么意思？
when the preset once-far-away goals （什么意思）finally jump into our vision and within easy reach can we enjoy the happiness of success.
For example, a student who ... [/quote]

熊猫·~：）
这么问问题有点看不清楚的说·~~~可不可以加个序号，再给个上下文呀~~
第1个没上下文我不大好解释
第2个once-far-away goals 我觉得是曾经制定的远大目标
第3个     [font=Verdana]For example, a student who fails to concentrate on studies and at the last moment tries to[color=red] [color=black]cram,[/color] [/color]hoping to [color=red][color=black]get away with it[/color],[/color] finds the result [color=red]more often than not f[/color]rustratingly unsatisfactory. [/font]
[font=Verdana]这个有点双重否定的意思，我觉得中间有一个省略：finds the result [color=red]more often f[color=#000000]rustratingly unsatisfactory [/color]than not f[/color]rustratingly unsatisfactory.[/font]
[font=Verdana]比较的是often，就是失望的次数大于满意的次数。
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第4个：[/size][/font][/size][/font][/size][/font][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][size=10.5pt][size=10.5pt]Very true is the saying that hard work never goes unrewarded. 是倒装 正序：The saying that hard work never goes unrewarded is very true[/size][/size][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][size=10.5pt][size=10.5pt]hard work never goes unrewarded 就是努力不会没有收获的意思[/size][/size][/size][/font]

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啊，惭愧啊，又偷懒了
落落，
第一个问题是：
It takes non-stop and even painful efforts in order to succeed. Relying on Goddess Luck will get you nowhere at all.
帮看一下啊:loveliness:

[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]Many people visit museums when they travel to new places .Why do you think people visit museums?[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]这篇文章要是让我写，就惨了，[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]我觉得第一点理由挺好，第二点有点牵强了吧，跟new place 好像无关，第三点凑合。[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]其中第三点里面得[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]
Moreover, people that are preoccupied with one subject would like to visit every museum on that subject.跟第二点好像重了吧。[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总分总：[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总：原文（重复题目，museums are...they are reflection of what a particular society regards as important.there are ideas,...and people visit museums for many reasons :....)[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（基本上一样得）[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第一分：原文（people visit museums to find out the history of a new place and what the place is preserved.for ex..the firsthand knowledge of western art history is preserved in.. and history about america in...)[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（基本一样得）[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第二分：原文（personnal connection to a subject.there are professional museums all over the world  providing various kinds of  information in certain fields.for ex...2)[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（基本一样）[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第三分：原文（some people hold hobby of visiting museums,for ex,one like to discover history in museums,one like the feeling of peace when walking in the museum.and the others visit every museum for a subject.)[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（基本一样）[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总：原文（in order to know a new place ,people will visit museums)[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（know about the history of a new place,and get a deeper understanding of the past .or just develop their interest.三点分对应）[/size][/font][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]看来这篇文章写得很好，专家都没怎么改。我.....[/size][/font][/size][/font]

[[i] 本帖最后由 功夫熊猫2 于 2008-9-9 20:19 编辑 [/i]]

[b][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]TOPIC #025:[/size][/font][/b]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan?[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第三个理由一开始没看懂，我真是。。[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总分总：[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总：原文（construction of a large shopping center is a form of development.It should be supported because it provides benefits to the locality and the people who live there.such a venture has many benefits including an improvement in availability of various products in the area and a rise in the property value)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（...a positive change in the locality)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第一分：原文（improved availability of certain products.a large variety of goods will be born with the development .saving people's time ,money and energy)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（是把原文的第一二分连在一起了）（enjoy improved availability and better service of various products.a large amount of goods will be there,people and businessmen will be attracted there.so people enjoy various goods and better service and save money ,time and energy and the goods are relatively cheap.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第二分:原文（initating a series of development there.other business people will open their own stores there too.and goods are various and the price is relatively cheap.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第三分：原文（the development brings about a change in the nature of the neighborhood.a small locality with few inhabitants will turn into busy city center.it will benefit the landowner)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（a positive change will occur.....the industry development ,including real estate ,will be pushed forward)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总：原文（although there might be undesirable side effects , the constrution of a large shopping center will be desirable.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（.....for the further development of the neighborhood and improved quality of life for the people)[/size][/font]

[b][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]【[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]9[/size][/font][/b][b][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]】[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]TOPIC #043:[/size][/font][/b]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities?[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]这篇文章是我能欣赏地最号地[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总分总。文章罗列地三个理由特别好，专家改动地也少[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总：原文（第一句应题，many people are attracted dangerous sports and similar activities.reasons are that these people find excitement because they do things which most people cannot.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（把那个因果分成两个理由，first,they find excitement in doing these activities.second,they experience achievement in doing things that most people can not)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第一分：原文（those people want to stand apart from the rest.they do dangerous things to prove that they're different from the rest.for ex)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（基本上一样）[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第二分：原文（doing these dangerous activities give them a sense of achievement they have overcome the most fears,so they'll feel confident.another,some people wanna be famous through these activities.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（give them a sense of achievement that help overcome their fears and be confident.another ,gain fame..)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]第三分：原文（some people get motivated by the sense of excitement that it add to the boring life.forex)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（...dangerous as they are,these sports take these people from unbearable boredom  and add fun to their life.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]总；原文（attraction of those thrill loving people who want to stand apart from the rest by proving their uniqueself.)[/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]专家（基本一样，不过
[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]
[color=red]for those who enjoy the sense of achievement drawn from surmounting fear in face of danger, and for those depressed by day-after-day dullness.这个跟[font=Verdana][size=10.5pt]dangerous sports and activities basically attract those thrill-loving people who want to stand a class apart by proving their unique self to the world around them, 是什么关系，是什么句式啊？[/size][/font][/color][/size][/font]
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[quote]原帖由 [i]功夫熊猫2[/i] 于 2008-9-9 19:27 发表 [url=http://bbs.xiaoma.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=217851&ptid=20683][img]http://bbs.xiaoma.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
啊，惭愧啊，又偷懒了
落落，
第一个问题是：
It takes non-stop and even painful efforts in order to succeed. Relying on Goddess Luck will get you nowhere at all.
帮看一下啊:loveliness: [/quote]

get nowhere是无进展的意思
就是依赖凭借运气会让你毫无进展。

[font=Verdana][color=#ff0000]for those who enjoy the sense of achievement drawn from surmounting fear in face of danger, and for those depressed by day-after-day dullness.这个跟[size=10.5pt]dangerous sports and activities basically attract those thrill-loving people who want to stand a class apart by proving their unique self to the world around them, 是什么关系，是什么句式啊？[/size][/color][/font]
落落这又是什么意思？:handshake

我觉得这个句子中，for是状语, 个人觉得似乎是修饰句子的。
我的翻译是这样:
对于那些享受战胜面对危险的恐惧而产生快感的人们和那些觉得每天生活索然无味的人们来说，危险的体育和活动基本上就是吸引这些喜欢极限运动并希望通过证明自己的特立独行而显得与众不同的人们。