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作文求拍！！work or money

[font=&quot][size=4][b]It ismore important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot ofmoney .[/b][/size][/font]
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[font=&quot]whenit comes to job as a work to enjoy or as s way to make money , some peopleplace money in their first consideration. They
believe
if people had notpossessed enough money, they would be constricted and be difficult to cope withdaily route. but as far as I am concern, enjoying the career itself is
more benefit than considering career asmaking money [/font]
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[font=&quot]if aperson concentrate too much on how to make money , he would probably be
stressed out and omit to experience the joyof living. Job is one of most significant aspects in people life ,but if itturn out to be just a tool of making money then maybe brings some problem topeople. namely one may lost the general source of happiness, or lack
motivational factor in their job. What’sworse, it is possible that the money he made might never compensate what hemissed during his work.[/font]
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[font=&quot]Inanother place, interesting is a best force to encourage people to hard work onhis job
to some extend. it difficult fora person process his work completely due to lack of motivation. How can aperson
perform his work efficient oreven excellently while he can not obtain pleasure from his work? Therefore,enjoying what you like to do is far outweigh that only earning money withoutinteresting and happiness.[/font]
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[font=&quot]Furthermore,people may attach some problems if they become a slave of money. For example ,people who always work over ,may be six days a week, tend to deteriorate their health.Many people who work hard and sum up a large amount of money usually found thatthey were in bad health and have not energy to travel or hiking . anotherproblem is some people even commit crime just to the acquire the illegalbenefit.
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[font=&quot]Fromwhat discussed above, it is truly more important for people to enjoy their workand will to dedicate themselves to their work. people who act like the machineand just to earn money probably have some problems in their life. So I trulyagree with the statement that
working ata enjoying job is far outweigh just earning a lot of money.[/font]

work for joy or money? different people hold different views due to their distinct background. some people assert that money takes priority to anything else because without money, would there be a variety of constrictions resulting in difficulties to cope with problems effectively. However, as far as I am concerned, a job I am fond of, instead with lots money, weigh much more.

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Primarily, too much concentration on money may deprive people of opportunities to enjoy the life’s joy from communicating with family member, playing games together with close friends and of good health conditions which are also a source of happiness. Admittedly, job is one of our most significant elements in our life, yet it does not equal to the meaning that job could substitute a variety of happiness. Imagine that what will be the results if a person is busy in his job day and night, in pursuit for large number of premium but tortured by unavoidable of stress? There is a good possibility that he is gradually alienating with his family members and friends due to lack of communications and, at the same time, risking himself in health under long-term exposure to stress; both cannot be compensated by money. From this point of view, it goes without saying that a job with happiness weights more than one with too much money.

昨天因为有点事情，没有修改完成，今天继续补上~ 纯属个人观点，估计里头也有错误，您可以自己再修改一下哦~~


In addition, our interest in the job, instead of a large number of money, is a long term momentum for us to work hard. Any person who loves his job will be willing to spend most of time working and never feel stressed; he ever complains how short a day is! In other word, this job itself is a great motivation for him to work harder and as well, is a source of his long run happiness. In contrast, with the same work, another person who does it just for money, in all probability, will quit it for lack of interest and incentive except dollars. Under such circumstance, the idea that we should work for joy is tenable.

Last but not least, money can not become our terminal goal. Without any doubt, money plays significant role in our life; becoming rich is an important and wealth goal for most people. However, it does not mean we live for money. There is a famous saying that we make a living by what we earn, but we make a life by what we give, so we should live a life of meaning in place of money’s slaves. For example, with the idea that we should contribute our society by way of jobs in mind, consider every possibility that our fruit of work is meaningful to the society, which can make your life meaningful. From this angle, a job we enjoy weights more than one we can earn much money.

To sum up, from all dimensions mentioned above incorporated, I vote for the idea that a job with much money should give away to one that a job we enjoy.