maxx 2008-8-8 15:14
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][font=Verdana][size=4]题目是： sports and social activities是否与学术一样重要以及拨同样的经费？[/size][/font][/size][/color][/align]
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][size=4][font=Verdana]There is much controversy over the topic how the schools evaluate the importance of sports and social activities. From my own perspective, my preference would incline to the adverse side of neglecting the significance of influence of sports and society in the universities after a deliberative calculation, especially as this will remarkably benefit our communication ability, personality and health. Please allow me to explain.[/font][/size][/size][/color][/align]
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][size=4][font=Verdana]I cannot negate that some people do consider academics occupies a more dominant role. For one thing, the academic apprehension will contribute to their occupation. For another, some sports and social activities are dangerous, even fatal, like deathful accidents of bungee-jumping and tragic murder of ex-president John Kennedy.[/font][/size][/size][/color][/align]
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][size=4][font=Verdana]Although such kind of view point asserts one or two minor virtues, yet, as far as I am concerned, the merits of activities about sports and society far outweigh those of the academics. Three premier causes are stated below.[/font][/size][/size][/color][/align]
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][size=4][font=Verdana]In the first place, we can communicate with others in a more efficient means. For instance, in order to be the leader of a students union, which is one of the social activities, one need to make his effort to win the votes. Only through persuading them can he gain support from fellow students. Thereby, this candidate will hold an eloquent speech confidently to encourage his advocates to elect him. Therefore, social activities will enhance his competence on communication. [/font][/size][/size][/color][/align]
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][size=4][font=Verdana]Moreover, personality will be improved. Take me as an example, when I am doing some sports, like tracking or swimming, from burdensome schoolwork can I alleviate. There will be no threat that such activities would distract me from cramming for the examinations. Instead, adequate sports exercise will help me relax and concentrate on my studies, keeping a optimistic mood toward advancing academic comprehension.[/font][/size][/size][/color][/align]
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][size=4][font=Verdana]Last but not least, without doubt, these activities will upraise our exuberance. It is surveyed by scholars in Chinese University of Hong Kong that a student obtaining decent sports and social opportunities tends to have a more mentally and physically strong body. As a result, he will be able to sustain considerable stress under unprecedented circumstances and attain a more desirable weight no matter what he has for meals, which is notably appealing to some girls.[/font][/size][/size][/color][/align]
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[align=left][color=black][size=10.5pt][size=4][font=Verdana]To put all in a nutshell, all factors that I reasoned above determine me to strongly commit to a notion that schools should implement equivalent financial support and significant attention to finance and approve sports and social activities, as well as academics, that not only do sports and society upraise a person's communication skills, but they also assist to ameliorate his personality and health. [/font][/size][/size][/color][/align]
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