sodapop 2008-8-7 18:35
第二篇求大家幫忙！！！！！情況緊急！！9號啊~~~
是看讓人思考的電影還是純粹娛樂大衆的？
Nowadays, there are more and more movies in a variety of types come out in the daily life. Some people prefer to watch the ones that make people think, however, in my point of view, I would prefer to choose the ones that simply amuse and entertain peeple. There are several reasons why I think so.
First of all, it is no doubt that most people are busy working or studying all day, and they seldom have chances to relax themselves. And then watching amusing and funny movies can be a good way to relieve oneself from all the stress and problems he or she need to face. Also watching these kinds of movies make people laugh, which is healthy and beneficial for him or her according to the latest reserch.
In addition, comedied have the "magic" to gather people around. For example, when every member ina family is busy working and dealing with stuff, they seldom have time to spend time with their family and friends. Then the interesting movies play an important role in collecting family and friends. And also they usually become the things family and friends talk together in the free time.
Last but not least, admittedly, films which make people chew the cud are more valuable and admirable, however, those films make people sad and feel down more or less. Work and study have already exhaust him or her, it is time for them to refresh and relax.
As a conclusion, we can see that amusing movies make people laugh and is necessary in the family and among friends, so that is why I prefer to watch movies that entertain people.
感謝。。。。。~！
sssppalin 2008-8-8 12:11
in the daily life，这个the 改成our 比较好一点
would prefer to choose 这个最好是would rather 和prefer to 选一个，因为would 也是表意愿的，放在一起会有点重复
problems he or she need to face这个吧个人认为have to 会好点因为有点不得不的意思
还有个小小的建议，我发现seldom, busy working, choose, prefer to这些单词和句型在文中用的比较频繁，最好是用过一次在换一些别的词或句型，那样不会觉得重复，对吧~
