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太阳peach 2008-8-7 16:45

处女作写完未改一字,求拍~~

这是旧托185题中的第36题,写完以后未改一字。

[b]36. Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives. * automobiles * bicycles * airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.[/b]

[size=3]There has been a famous road between Asia and Europe, by which orient merchants transported china and silk to the west and they also transported goods from Europe to orient, called “silk road”. It was so convenient for the merchants to transport that silk road has been considered as a milestone in the history. While by this road, the distance businessmen covered were hundreds of miles and the time they spend were hundreds of days. The transportation of the world was not expedient until the new milestone appeared.[/size]
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[size=3]From my personal angle, It never remains suspicious of the point that airplane is another milestone of transportation in modern time, for that its appearance has changed people’s lives.[/size]
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[size=3]For one thing, it is the airplane that leads the time of traveling to be cut down. For that, the distance between any two points in the world has been shortened. Now, I always have a dream that one day I can have my breakfast in China and have my dinner in USA, in that it will take people only a few hours to travel to any places in the world by planes. For this reason, the development of the world has been speeded up more and more.[/size]
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[size=3]For another thing, rarely inconvenient can people feel when they travel by plane carrying many things. Unlike the horses or the ships, planes not only offer high speed travel to people, but provide high speed transportation of the goods as well. Everyone, especially the merchants, can take many things with them to travel form one place to another in that the plane can never fail to hold the heavy luggage.[/size]
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[size=3]So, above all, the airplane has offered so many conveniences to people that it has changed the style of traveling in modern time. Therefore, I can take it for granted that plane has lead the world to become a family in which everyone can communicate easily and trade expediently.
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太阳peach 2008-8-8 10:38

每人拍吗?自己先顶一个
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