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我的写作模板。跪求修改

Where there is a decision, there is an argument

different people have different opinions towards this argument
.In the current tough world we always have to face some hard-to-make choices, among which is the question whether to choose (反方 动名词 ) or to choose (正方 动名词 ). Devoted advocates of ( 反方观点 ) are those people who hold the opinion that ( 反优). On the contrary, from my point of view， the advantages of ( 正观点 ) are much greater than ( 反方观点）Among countless factors which（正方观点）, there are several conspicuous ones as follows.
without doubt, It is obvious that ( 正方 不定式 ) gives us a wide variety of opportunities to ( 正优点1 ),so (ADJ优点),From the most updated survey about （论题)conducted by sohu.com, one of the biggest websites in China, the thousands of people convey a clear information that ( 正方带来好处1 ).

As ( 正方好处1 ), ( 正方 ) at the same time bring in ( 正方好处2 ) to our domestic and working life. For instance, my friend Candy, who( 持正方观点), (做了什么事). ( 带来什么好的后果 2 ). If she ( 不持正方 ), she would not (好处2 ).

However, each coin has two sides,
此处应先写转折+缺点。。。We may mention a common example of___。 When the advantage and disadvantage are carefully contemplated, the most striking finding is self-evident：the superiorities of ___carry more weight than its inferiorities.





From what has been discussed above, we can safely arrive at the conclusion,
No one can deny that…..
Only by….that it makes our life more and more satisfy. Consequently,…...:lol

回复 1# 的帖子

写的还是不错的， 条例还是很清晰的， 但是我觉得这些只能保证你的文章有个好的结构。好的句式也不缺了，例子也有。。 能不能拿到good我认为就看你中文的部分了， 建议你使用你的模板写篇作文发上来大家看看， 也给大家一个例子， 看看如何运用模板

很好了~

我觉得已经很不错的说。。。。
In the current tough world we always have to face some hard-to-make choices, among which 。。。这些好像有些话题不好用。。。比如说build sth。
小建议仅供参考。。。