eagledoudou 2008-7-7 21:14
TOEFL写作的总体概论（转贴）
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[size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt]写作策略：提前准备，不可依赖临场发挥[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[font=宋体][size=18pt]总体要求：[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=18pt]首段写作[/size][/font][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=18pt]：别具一格[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=18pt]主题句写作：亮点制造[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=18pt]拓展段落[/size][/font][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=18pt]：追求流畅[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=18pt]末段写作[/size][/font][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=18pt]：直接套用[/size][/font][/color][/size][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]
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[size=4][color=black][b][font=宋体][size=18pt]首段写作的创新写法：[/size][/font][/b][b][size=18pt][/size][/b]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（1）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]名人名言式[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[font=宋体][size=18pt]“[/size][/font][font=Georgia][size=18pt]Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]”[/size][/font][font=Georgia][size=18pt] Ralph Waldo Emerson[/size][/font]
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[size=4][color=black]“to be, or not to be, that is the question”[/color][/size][/size][/font]
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[size=4][color=black]“to live in the countryside, or to live in the urban, that is
the question”[/color][/size][/size][/font]
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[size=4][color=black]The foreign moon is rounder than the domestic one![/color][/size][/size][/font]
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[size=4][color=black]The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence.[/color][/size][/size][/font]
[size=4][color=black][b][font=宋体][size=18pt]注：一篇文章中的名人名言极限是三句。[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Georgia][size=18pt][/size][/font][/b]
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[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（2）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]排比发难式[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]Indoor activities and outdoor activities[/font][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou City? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridorf in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the Franrance Hill?[/font][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]If you have never had such experience, you would never know how much fun outdoor activities could bring you.[/font][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]Topic: money buy a car or go traveling? [/font][/size]
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[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（3）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]个性的句子[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]in higher education, we do not need a vision of the perfect curriculum, the perfect text book, the perfect website, the perfect classroom, the perfect campus, the perfect homestudy, the perfect combination of media.[/font][/size]
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[b][font=宋体][size=18pt]中间段落：[/size][/font][/b][b][size=18pt][/size][/b]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（1）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]总结性强[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]when I woek in day time, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.[/font][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]Outside enviroment during day time helps to improve efficiency in many ways. [/font][/size]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（2）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]避免低级错误[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[font=宋体][size=18pt]主题句的分项检查[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（3）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]避免绝对化[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]The senior is efficient[/font][/size]
[font=宋体][size=18pt]学会使用插入语[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[b][font=宋体][size=18pt]拓展段落：[/size][/font][/b][b][size=18pt][/size][/b]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（1）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]科学数据法[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（2）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]假想事例[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（3）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]反面阐述[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（4）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]虚拟语气[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（5）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]举例论证[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[b][font=宋体][size=18pt]末段写作：[/size][/font][/b][b][size=18pt][/size][/b]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（1）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]名人名言[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[/color][/size][size=4][color=black][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（2）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]以退为进[/size][/font][size=18pt][/size]
[/color][/size][color=black][size=4][font=宋体][size=18pt][font=Times New Roman]（3）
[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=18pt]正面总结[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][color=black][b][font=宋体][size=18pt][size=4]注：在进入考场前结尾已准备好[/size]！[/size][/font][/b][b][size=18pt][/size][/b][/color]
qifeihu 2008-7-17 23:49
谢谢doudou的分享
大家要记住开头的几句最为关键
[size=6][color=magenta][b]写作策略：提前准备，不可依赖临场发挥
总体要求：
首段写作 ：别具一格
主题句写作：亮点制造
拓展段落 ：追求流畅
末段写作 ：直接套用[/b][/color][/size]
