maxx 2008-7-6 21:11
大家继续对我的新作心狠手辣地拍吧！谢谢！关于cellphone。OTZ
V_V 快考了~ 希望大家可以客观地评评我的新作~
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[font=Arial][size=10.5pt][color=red][size=5]Should people use mobile phones in public transportations (say bus, train or airplane)?[/size][/color][/size][/font]
[font=Trebuchet MS][size=4]There is much controversy over the topic whether it is approprite for us to encourage the utility of cellphones on public trasportations. From my own perspective, my preference would incline to the adverse side of public utilization of mobiles after a deliberative calculation especially accroding to the potential detrimental impacts of health, danger and interuption of cellphones.[/size][/font]
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[font=Trebuchet MS][size=4] I cannot negate that some people do prefer talking in the public with the help of cellphone. For one thing, this is more beneficial to their communication with friends. For another, they can use the the multi-functional gadget to listen to the music or operate business.[/size][/font]
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Although such opinion holds one or two minor advantages, yet, to my point of view, the merits of abolition of cellphone in the public areas still far outweigh those of the opposition. Three premier causes are presented below.[/size][/font]
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In the first place, the health issue. Nowadays everyone is considering about the health, from doing sports to eliminating the inhalement of exhausts. However, we neglect the defect of cellphone. Despite the fact that no scientific evidence has ensured that usage of cellphone will deteriorate us, it is still not contributing to your health. Due to an experiment conducted by a Japanese university, the signals that cellphone radiates will stimulate your brain to enhance ebuliance, or to make you exciting, with the abuse of this gadget. Thus, you may not want to feel sleepy until midnight.[/size][/font]
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Moreover, it is sometimes hazardrous for us to use cellphone in some public areas. For instance, the emmsion of cellphone is likely to make the plane aloft lose control. As a result, a tragedy may have occurred within the use on the plane. In addition, the radiation of cellphones will sometimes cause the gas station to explode, can you imagine how serious the situation will be if this is to happen?![/size][/font]
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Last but not least, abuse of mobiles in the publicity usually comes with interruption. Last week, I entered a theater with delight since I acquired good grades in my final exams. However, the clamor of my neighborhood’s cellphone entirely ruined my comfort. In addition, his misbehavior exceeded the limit that I could undergo as long as he talked with his friends about the end of the movie for ten minutes… I could do nothing but dispise him on his perishing bothering.[/size][/font]
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[font=Trebuchet MS][size=4]To put all in a nutshell, three factors I reasoned above determine me to strongly commit to the notion that the use of cell phone should be prohibited as not only will the cellphone in the public areas influence your health on a negative aspect, but you will also suffer from the drawbacks of danger and interuption of
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针对各位牛马们对我上次作文的评价，小小马我用了比较好的理由~
让批评来得更猛烈一些吧！！！！！
谢谢！:$
[[i] 本帖最后由 maxx 于 2008-7-6 21:13 编辑 [/i]]
