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xueshanhu 2008-6-28 23:53

06.12.15的t4 大家能不能帮我简化一下

写得太长了,总结能力好差啊Well, in this set of materials, the reading passage gives an introduction about subliminal perception. It states that if the stimulus is too faint, people would usually fail to realize its existence.
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In the listening passage, the professor goes on to illustrate that by giving an example.w6LjX,|T5x
Two groups were shown a different picture. There was an angry boy in the picture for the first group. And the picture for the second group described the same boy who was happy. But both pictures were moved quickly so that people couldn’t see them clearly. After this, all participants were clearly shown the third picture in which the boy has no emotions. Interestingly, most people in the first group think the boy is negative, while the majority of the second group held opposite position.
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Well, by this means, the professor proves subliminal perception.

秋姐 2008-6-29 08:21

It's OK, not wordy. X(v,C8r2Ns6s
几个地方稍注意一下:?~7|1P[ q'}9yo)I"I3d
1. 转述时,尽量用that.  as in after that,
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B:K.[}O"JL 3. 为了更加明确,应该加一句。When the participants of both groups were asked to describe the character of the boy in the third picture, there came the funny part.
;iFN6H2WXR5K-DC 4. 然后去掉interestingly.
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