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[font=Times New Roman]Should young children spend most of their time on school studies or playing?[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Young children’s education is a major concern for both their parents and the whole society.some people hold the observation that young children should focus on school studies while others contradict that playing should occupy most of their time.both sides have solid reasons.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]As children are the future of a nation,parents and the society attach much importance to children’s education,especially when they are very young.it is known to all that some developing countries boast high level education results.it is largely due to their government advocation that let education prosper our country.so in those countries,parents,schools and education deparments will make a joint effort to achieve their goal and they value every minute to supervise children,partially[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]the younger ones,to study very hard in most of their time.also,it is universally acknowledged that much earlier a child receives his or her edution,the better he or she will do in the future.so a great number of children are sent to various kinds of schools at an early age.no doubt these schools will not only enable them to perform better than those who are sent to schools at a relatively late age,but also tap their potentials and give their talents to the full play.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]However,some people are worried about the negative effect intensive early study will exert on young children’s mental development.in the modern world, more and more young children suffer from too much pressure from their school studies,which will more or less block their mental development.so they maintain that most of the early childrenhood should be spent playing rather than studies.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]From my perspective, I propose that children would better embark on their study.but they probably shouldn’t spend most of their time on it.parents and the whole society should notice that striking a balance beween studies and playing is of great significance because only in that way,can children benefit to the utmost.being mentally healthy,they can do more excellent jobs at their early age.[/font]

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Should young children spend most of their time on school studies or playing?

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