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［已更改］口语真题2008年6月22日[秋姐进来点评下]

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Describe the famous person you admire most. Explain why you admire this person. Include details and examples to support your response. [/size][/font][/color][/align][align=left][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][color=#000080][size=4][font=Times New Roman]Task 2
D'],Z` |v Some people believe that universities should focus their money on academic studies. Other people believe that universities should also use their funds to provide students more entertainments such as movies and concerts. What is your opinion, and why?[/font][/size][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4][font=Arial][color=#0000ff]   [/color][/font][/size][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][b][font=Arial][size=4][color=#0000ff][/color][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=Arial][size=4][color=#0000ff][/color][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4][font=Arial][color=#0000ff][/color][/font][/size][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4][font=Arial][color=#0000ff][/color][/font][/size][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4][font=Arial][color=#0000ff]Some people believe money should be put into entertainment[/color][color=black]‘cause films make life simple,colorful and dynamic,[/color][/font][color=blue][font=Arial]But I think[/font][/color][color=black][font=Arial]  the opposite because academic studies such as literature make us concern itself with humanity's true problems , thinking about how to make our life and nourish the society better ,so spending on academic [/font][/color][/size][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][size=4][b][color=black][font=Arial]purposes would [/font][/color][color=blue][font=Arial]be better for three reasons. [/font][/color][/b]&y7aZ:Zl'z"q G:h
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[/color][/size][/font][size=4][color=navy][font=宋体]［要[/font][/color][/size][size=4][color=navy][font=宋体]点】：[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]primacy effect[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，说[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]People tend to judge others by first impression[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。第一印象很重要。[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]Once it is formed[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]it can hardly be changed[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]People tend to pay attention to detail to support [/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]证实[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]first impression[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，而自动忽略一些与第一印象不符的事实。[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]【教授举例】：[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]第一个例子是教授的亲身经历。刚毕业的时候，他在一个实验室当[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]research assistant[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。第一周，他提了一个[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]really helpful idea to[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]改进实验[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]experiment[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。实验获得了很大成功。他的[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]Boss[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]觉得他很可靠，很赏识他，逢人便赞扬是[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]star research assistant[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。即使他在之后的工作也犯了错误，工作表现一般（[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]OK, average[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]），他的[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]Boss[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]都不计较[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]ignore[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，觉得他好怎么都好。[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]第二个例子是他的一个女同事[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]co-worker[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]的经历。她没那么[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]fortunate[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。第一周，她做实验犯了一个大错[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]big mistake[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，损坏了实验仪器，导致实验数据[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]data[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]丢失，[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]wasted laboratory[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]的[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]time[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]和[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]money[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。所以，他的[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]boss[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]老板对她评价很低。认为她[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]ureliable and incompetent[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，即便之后她后来的表现非常好。过了一段时间，这个教授经常犯错误，而那个女同事只是偶犯小错，做[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]research[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]比他好。即便如此，[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]boss[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]还是认为她[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]unreliable[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。[/font][/color][/size][/align][align=left][font=宋体][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=宋体][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=宋体][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][font=Arial][size=4][color=#0000ff][/color][/size][/font][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][font=Arial][size=4][color=#0000ff][/color][/size][/font][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][b][size=4][font=Times New Roman][color=#0000ff]In this set of materials, the reading passage explains[/color][color=#000000] primary effect. it's the first impression lead us to judging others.[/color][/font][/size][/b][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b][size=0px]x[/size][/b][b][color=blue]In the listening passage, the professor gives 2 examples to illustrate this. One of them is that the [/color][color=black]perfessor came up with a really helpful idea ,[/color][/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][这里插了个说明，用了个顶真，会不会缀余，口语要用多些短句么］[/size][/font][/b][color=red][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]i[/b][/font][/size][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]n his 1st week as a research assistant ,to make the[/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b][color=black][color=red]experiment  succesful , so succesful that[/color] boss often speaks highly of his talent and thinks [/color][color=yellowgreen]of[/color][/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b][color=black]him as a reliable guy, [/color][/b][/font][/size][/color][size=4][font=Times New Roman][color=navy][b][color=black]although ,he [/color][color=yellowgreen]did[/color][/b][/color][/font][/size][/align][align=left][size=4][font=Times New Roman][color=navy][b][color=black]ake some mistakes and [/color][color=#ff0000]hav[size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]e[/b][/font][/size][/color][/b][/color][/font][/size][/align][align=left][size=4][font=Times New Roman][color=red][b]had [/b][/color][/font][/size][size=4][font=Times New Roman][color=navy][b][color=black] no breakthrough in his job [/color][color=red]ever since[/color][/b][/color][/font][/size][/align][align=left][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#ff0000][[color=black]口语里没看到有回答用现在[/color][/color][/size][/font][/b][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=black]完成时的，不[/color][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=black]肯定:L ］[/color][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][size=4][font=Times New Roman][color=navy][b]the other is that his co-worker make a huge mistake concerning the data loss,[color=red]not only[/color][/b][/color][/font][/size][/align][align=left][color=red][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]wasting a large amount of money and time spenting on the experiment,but[/b][/font][/size][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b] also ruining[/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][color=red][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4]her[/size][/font][/b][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b] 1st impression [/b][/font][/size][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]left [/b][/font][/size][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]in boss's mind.[/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][color=red][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b][[color=black]请问[/color][/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][color=red][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b][color=black]伴随状语可以套not only ,but also不类[/color]］[/b][/font][/size][/color][color=red][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]As a[/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][color=red][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]result,  her [/b][/font][/size][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]unreliable and incompetent image[/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][size=4][font=Times New Roman][color=navy][b][color=red]has never changed[/color] ,[color=yellowgreen]despite the great [/color][/b][/color][/font][/size][color=yellowgreen][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]improve[/b][/font][/size][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b]ment[/b][/font][/size][/color][/align][align=left][color=yellowgreen][size=4][font=Times New Roman][b] she [/b][/font][/size][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4]makes  [/size][/font][/b][/color][align=left][color=navy][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][/size][/font][/b][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][/size][/font][/b][/align][font=Times New Roman][size=4]Task 5
+d7k}:e'R1cU(cn [/size][/font][/color][size=4][color=navy][font=宋体]【学生困难】：女生[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]during semester break[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]要[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]help[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]一个教授[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]do a research[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。她想住在学校，但学校[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]dorm[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]都要关掉。她必需尽快[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]find somewhere to live[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]【解决方案】：男生给她两个建议[/font][/color][/size][size=4][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]: oM9~b/RS$J
[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]建议[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]1[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]、住在她的好友的公寓里[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]stay with her friends’ in apartment[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]friend would not charge her[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。女生说她有一个好朋友就住学校附近，但因她在假期每天要工作，所以她和她的朋友的[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]schedule[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]可能[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]different[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。她的朋友可能要开[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]parties[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，太吵，会打扰她。而她必须早起去工作，又可能吵到朋友。[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]建议[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]2[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]、学校可能会开放一些宿舍，以对付这种[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]special things[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，女生可以去申请[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]get special permission from school to live in the dorm[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，虽然可能得多交一些钱，但安静[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]quiet[/font][/color][/size][/align][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font]
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Hy"f+NgP;| [/color][/size][/b][/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4][color=blue]The other solution is[/color] to get a special permission to move to an a little expensive yet quiet dorm .[color=blue]I tend to agree with the second solution because [/color]she would still have the chance to study[/size][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4] with full concentration , and s[/size][/b][/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4]he would be accustomed to the new dorm and get good sleep[/size][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=yellowgreen]as well[/color][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][b][size=4][color=blue]Also[/color] she wouldn’t have to take so much trouble asking friends to help her solve problems [/size][/b][/font][/color][/align][align=left][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][b][通篇像这样情态动词[/b]都[b]用would，这样会不会算有毛病呢］[/b][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][b][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/b][/align][align=left][size=4][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]Task 6
#F nb Dos6\8V0m [/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]【讲课要点】：[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]Playing is important to children’s emotional development[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]Playing[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]对于孩子来说，有两个好处：[/font][/color][/size][color=navy]
M7ej^:f#or8Yo [font=Times New Roman][size=4]1[/size][/font][/color][size=4][color=navy][font=宋体]、[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]playing can cultivate[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]孩子们[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]to control their[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]的一些事情，从而[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]obtain sense of control[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。因为他们的很多事情都是[font=Times New Roman][color=#000000]depend on adults to make decision[/color][/font]由家长[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]parents[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]做主[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]design[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]的。孩子们对自己的生活没有什么[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]control[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，所以他们总是觉得[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]uneasy [color=#000000]depresse[/color]d helpless[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。而在玩的时候就不同了，因为[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]kids[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]可以在玩的过程中自己控制和决定很多事情，比如[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]which toy to play with[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]how to play[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]等等。这样做，有助于培养孩子们的[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]sense of [/font][/color][/size][/align][align=left][size=4][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]control[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。[/font][/color][/size][color=navy]
)yq}&TqJ;E YNM [font=Times New Roman][size=4]2[/size][/font][/color][size=4][color=navy][font=宋体]、[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]playing can safely meet children’s desire of destruction and their curiosity[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]，[/font][/color][color=navy][font=Times New Roman]without leading therir parents’ upset[/font][/color][color=navy][font=宋体]。[/font][/color][/size][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][color=#000000][size=4][font=宋体],[/font][font=Times New Roman]children[/font][font=宋体]可以随心所欲[/font][font=Times New Roman]express[/font][font=宋体]一些[/font][font=Times New Roman]emotion[/font][font=宋体]和[/font][font=Times New Roman]desire[/font][font=宋体]，比如[/font][font=Times New Roman]destructive[/font][font=宋体]的行为。家长通常很担心小孩会[/font][font=Times New Roman]break things[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=4]，但是玩的时候就没关系了，[color=#000080]比如[font=Times New Roman]use blocks to build a tower[/font][font=宋体]搭积木，他们搭好了，然后[/font][font=Times New Roman]smash it into [/font][/color][/size][color=navy][font=Times New Roman][size=4]pieces[/size][/font][/color][/align][align=left][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=Times New Roman][size=4][color=#000080][/color][/size][/font][/align][font=Arial][b][size=4][color=#ff8c00][align=left]
'kE)S.Z4ij+l [/color][color=black]In the lecture, the professor tells us about the impact[/color] that playing brought to children[color=darkorange].[/color][/align][align=left][color=red]He points about how parents continue to make decisions adversely affects,[/color][/align][align=left][color=red]in spite of the effect on their childrens base[/color][仿google上的point about how Microsoft continues to [color=black]make decisions[/color] in spite of the effect on their customer base]
,P.}Uj1a @ [/size][/b][/font][font=Arial][size=4][color=yellowgreen][color=#000000][/color][/color][/size][/font][font=Arial][size=4][b],[color=red]children  depressed and helpless[/color] .[[color=yellowgreen]请问[/color]这里要不要   加  时间关联词,像before 这样,now改善了    之类的呢 ,或者  有更好地表达  时间前后对比  的句子呢][/b][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=Arial][size=4][b]However,playing gives children  access to meet their [/b] [color=yellowgreen]deep need for [/color][b][color=yellowgreen]a sense of control[/color],  also welcomed by parents,[color=yellowgreen]since [/color]they [color=black]don't have to be upset[/color] about children's destructive behaviors.[/b][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=Arial][b][size=4]For example, they [color=yellowgreen]could express the desire fully[/color] through breaking things into pieces during the process of building a tower[/size][/align][/b][/font][align=left][font=Arial][size=4][b]In all, it was only with playing could  [/b][color=darkorange][b]balance the meet  possible between parents and children.[请问这里有没有错呢,[color=black]我用google搜了balance possible有一个这样的表[/color][color=black]达[/color][/b][color=#000000]Few believe work-life [/color][color=#cc0033]balance possible[/color][/color][color=#000000] [/color][/size][/font]][/font][/color][/font][/color][/align]
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欢迎鄙视！:lol

It was a good move. x)R F{S
语法方面需要斟酌。

报告秋姐，更改完毕，呵呵

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另外，提升一下视觉效果吧。