查看完整版本: 7月12日的托福，感觉要来不及了。不过还是得来啊！请大家帮忙（即备考日记）

我以前也贪玩了 就从这周一才开始认真学的 也是7.12  感觉挺紧张的 但是有信心 毕竟有这么多的马儿陪伴这呢 一起加油吧楼主:)

LZ加油 (Horse19

今天尝试写的第一篇作文。可以发到什么地方让大家帮忙修改吗？

Has television destroyed communication among people?
:]9DK&a#z         Technology develops day by day in such haste, of which television is a prime example. We are able to have more and more channels and more attractive programs than ever before. There is little doubt that watching television is a good recreational activity for the reason that it can help people feel comfortable and relaxed. However, a number of people hold the opinion that television has destroyed communication among people because people intend to spend more time on watching television instead of their families and friends. From my perspective, I agree with the latter idea.
%_6mw8c2O'H9o.A         According to a statistic on the internet, the number of people in the urban region of China who watch TV everyday occupies 92 percent. And they agree that ‘it is a sort of necessity in life’. Another survey is even more astonishing: the average number of hours that an American’s person spends on TV is 5. As everyone can find, there is only 24 hours a day for every person and most of them are spent on sleeping, work, studying and having meals. That’s clear how little time could a person spend with his/her families and friends, what is worse, five of which must be with television. BiC]F
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        However, the time that televisions can waste is far more than that. The most frequent topics people now talk with each other are always from television shows. And unfortunately, the topics always have nothing to do with the technology, the culture, the education field, instead, the scandal of a movie star, the complex and bored plot of soap opera occupies the talking. It will be completely a pity if the relationship between people is always about such stuff.'sE o7j}s9o9u,` N
        The invention of television in last century delighted people all over the world mostly because people thinks this magic stuff can bring people things far away from them. However, it is time to think about how to deal with problem that almost everyone is enjoying watching television which features something thousands kilometers away, but nobody can use a minute to send greeting to others even with the word ‘How are you doing?’.

回复 21# 的帖子

加油！
N$Np8g3F Y 其实我觉的时间是够用的。
S._[)L%BX `a'V 其实即使不够用了，又能有什么办法呢？O2^y%s(oW5q
不都得努力吗。
v'Q Duh#h'Y5r5],N 然后带着一点疲倦和信心去考试，即使考不过又怎么样呢？我做到了我能做的。就好。

坚持下去 我帮你发 叫高人帮你改改 或者你急的话 自己在写作版开个贴就OK了～～

回复 25# 的帖子

好人啊。热心肠~~

我也是要7月12号考试

现在我的情况比你的更要糟糕(yD9g D
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但不管怎么样 都要坚持下去(dGb])z.[8Fg7d~}9\
有时做起题来 真有种煎熬的感觉
'[2Ae2Q"k%pKE9ws 再苦也还是要挺过去
NYYYTH 松散下去时间照样跑掉 自己还不能留下什么f;mG&z
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所以还是要坚持n
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给自己打气
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A4a1U 加油 你们都是很厉害的eX/Bo@@2t
利用短短的几个月 就能冲

即使是不够用 又能怎么样呢
*w(ovU qJ3B 是啊 还是要努力s1l0QymN)s.^4g
你说的对`Q:~:\w$Y!i
我看好你哦

LZ关于作文的问题 给你问了 作文的版主说么州都有一个作文题目给大家练习[url]http://bbs.xiaoma.com/thread-15828-1-2.html[/url]
[Rs8\SRq gc 你就写上面的吧 他们好给你改 有关的作文问题去写作版逛逛～～

6月29日 备考日记
:Um?'P/| ^x 上午上完小学期的课。下午开始学习
8kV@D6}%iC 听了horse的场景分类的历史篇 错的比较多。 感觉记笔记的能力很弱。j&Uu*^PN%}O
接着背了3个口语段子。o(S P*M~Ra^B)}
然后把delta的口语部分全部做了一下。赞一下自己，终于知道口语t3-t6考什么了。
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~? KBCB7el 没有背作文段子。 n&gx%{P
感觉效率很低啊。

ＬＺ加油　还是不错哟　听听舒缓的音乐吧　呵呵　

晚了，6月30日 备考日志
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小学期实验报告，实验，上课…………
bP!|9]^| 只背了一个口语段子。。
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努力 一周后要考了5]*hD&iC@F5\!y
我们 加油
B@ Oh${VW7K 现在先不管会考的怎么样
.a!J v EL kf8R 只要一门心思的来备考
.iY9];x3M5C 加油 为你为我为大家

Lz加油！！坚持哟！！(Horse19

这两天很不好，想完成的计划都没能完成，看着电脑屏幕或者听着听力发呆……
H8o0Hf5Y 可能是因为学校的实验心烦吧。今天上完了小学期最后一堂课，下午又看了看书却有无从下手……I4h'rT^bz

#B?U[$j 好，从现在开始，做一个不只有计划，更要有纪律的人。学习英语的时候不bbs，不上网，短信，以及其他无关活动。.E#t+egKY
每学习50分钟，留出五分钟放松以及做一些杂事，但是那50分钟要保持精神的高度集中。}hjCD#S7J9W
最后一搏的努力，要来的痛快。自勉一下，同时非常感谢ls，ls的ls的支持。
.VIf)i MoH(n 加油。不怕。

就是 坚持！！！

7月2号 备考日记Xh9]J5kt
最后的3个小时，做了一套barron模拟，没写作文，口语还是不知道说什么。而且第一个竟然是听力加试。。
rEO}aO 感觉barron的阅读还行，听力段子时间太长了啊。

继续哟！！！牛 居然说barron的阅读还行(Horse19

错了5道题，不知道算不算还行....

7月3日，备考日记
"JQ"{'C0RdSn 把barron第一个模考的听力听写了一遍，其实觉得一句一句听还是可以听的很好的。如果连起来听，一是一些单词和用法反应不过来，二是到了最后注意力很难集中了，三是觉的barron的lecture结构有些复杂，四是。。。。。。。
P2d~*K$}M%d 总之问题很多。继续熬吧。 O8k2s4ua+Y H8tW
然后听了一下小马的分类，感觉好多了，可能是barron磨练的吧。
!CM.f3xO 把秋姐的口语的第一题部分背完了。争取今天和明天把第二题背掉。之后的3天背曼特宁，最后几天总结自己的模板。至少要拿下t1 t2啊。yBKkKz
看了几篇作文，自己又写了一篇，感觉不太好。一是理由和例子的选取，而是词和句子的运用。先贴在这吧，今天到写作版改改别人的文章再自己贴。Z;[~O)c,dm-j
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整体感觉还是像一片高考作文的延长版本，不过时间不长，大概是40分钟之内写完的。我是不是应该继续修改这篇文章？]df BI%^ yk

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