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29号考试 望大家猛拍~谢谢

180. Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.    During my school years in USA, I go to cinema every week. It's not only because of fun, but also some other reasons, such as movies help people to relax, tell some philosophies, and give us a chance to see the movie starts that we like. I think these also can be the reasons for why movies are so popular.   First, people try to relax by watching movies. After one day's work, people usually feel tired. They need to find something interesting and relaxing. Most movies are fun, it’s no doubt. Then, when you are sitting in the cinema, you will feel relaxing because of the dark room and the soft seats. You will forget the unhappy things and give your brain a break. To me, I like to watch a comedy when I was tired off my study.
  Also, movies tell people philosophies. Every director has their purposes when they try to making a movie. They want to show some important things which were forgotten by people, for example, the movie I Am Sam. This movie is about a mental disabled father and his child. It tells us no matter how stupid your father is, or how smart he is, he always love you. People are busy with their works today. They don’t have enough time to think what is right and wrong. So, they need movies to remind them. That’s one of the reasons why people like to watch movies.
  Finally, people watch movies because they want to see their idols. Maybe everyone has their own idols, such as my cousin who likes Daniel•Radcliffe very much. She didn’t miss any movies that have Daniel, include every season of Harry Potter.
  After all, movies are popular by many reasons, more and more people like it now. We can get a lot from it, such as enjoyment and philosophies. Movies are really good for us, and that’s why it is so popular.  
会不会短了点。。。

大致看了下,文章短了点322个字~
貌似很多语法错误比如try to do sth.
最后段应该是more and more people like them
第二段tell太多了可以用点teach educate等等~~

看了一下，全文流畅，不失一篇佳作。
如果说短了，那就再丰富一下论据和例子吧，
其实考场上能写出这样长度且流畅的作文是很不错的。
lz加油！

谢谢~明天尽力吧~