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我们一般每周四发一个作文题上来，可以看看前面的作文题的贴。
操作就是你把你的文章写好检查好（最好先把语法错误检查出来改正后）发上来，然后你去改你楼上的作文。看互改规则贴。

6月6日作文题12

1  people become quite logical  when they  try to choose  working  in groups or  working alone. 2  because  working in  groups and  woking alone  have  both disadvangtages and advantages ,so  you would consider  advantages  a great  choice. 3 for  instance, working alone can help us develop our independence which  is accepted practice in many situations. 4although working alone has many advantages ,in fact ,most of us have been accustomed to work   in  our lives. 5 as far as iam concerned ,working in groups  .......................

静心写的开头,所以帮忙批评,谢谢

把you 该成i

5 句应该该成; so ,i prefer working in groups over woking together . the  reason would be .................

you 该成people

first of all ,woking in groups  is usually associated  with  the word of efficiency . woking together can more easily  make decisions for us .

for  instance, we will salvage a lost child  in the sea.

people become quite logical  when they  try to choose  working  in groups or  working alone. 2  because  working in  groups and  woking alone  have  both disadvangtages and advantages ,so  people would consider  advantages  a great  choice. 3 for  instance, working alone can help us develop our independence which  is accepted practice in many situations. 4although working alone has many advantages ,in fact ,most of us have been accustomed to work   in  our lives. 5 so ,i prefer working in groups over woking together . the  reason would be raised in the following .

1first of all ,woking in groups  is usually associated  with  the word of efficiency . woking together can more easily  make decisions for us .2for  instance, we will salvage a lost child  in the sea.

apart  from the lost   reason, it is necessary for us to konw  inportant informations about   the  deepth of sea bed ,the weather   and  the characteristic of the child

people become quite logical  when they  try to choose  working  in groups or  working alone. 2  because  working in  groups and  woking alone  have  both disadvangtages and advantages ,so  people would consider  advantages  a great  choice. 3 for  instance, working alone can help us develop our independence which  is accepted practice in many situations. 4although working alone has many advantages ,in fact ,most of us have been accustomed to work   in  our lives. 5 so ,i prefer working in groups over woking together . the  reason would be raised in the following .

1first of all ,woking in groups  is usually associated  with  the word of efficiency . woking together can more easily  make decisions for us .2for  instance, we will salvage a lost child  in the sea. 3apart  from the lost   reason, it is necessary for us to konw  inportant informations about   the  deepth of sea bed ,the weather   and  the characteristic of the child .despite  we  ourselves have courage  to do it  , the time we should woke togher to deal with all the information in order to save time to salvage the lost child.

1people become quite logical  when they  try to choose  working  in groups or  working alone. 2  because  working in  groups and  woking alone  have  both disadvangtages and advantages ,so  people would consider  advantages  a great  choice. 3 for  instance, working alone can help us develop our independence which  is accepted practice in many situations. 4although working alone has many advantages ,in fact ,most of us have been accustomed to work   in  our lives. 5 so ,i prefer working in groups over woking together . the  reason would be raised in the following .

1first of all ,woking in groups  is usually associated  with  the word of efficiency . woking together can more easily  make decisions for us .2for  instance, we will salvage a lost child  in the sea. 3apart  from the lost   reason, it is necessary for us to konw  inportant informations about   the  deepth of sea bed ,the weather   and  the characteristic of the child .despite  we  ourselves have courage  to do it  , the time we should woke togher to deal with all the information in order to save time to salvage the lost child  .the time we can prioritize the first and important operations .

不写了,谢谢提建议啊

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