查看完整版本: 第二次写的作文，大家看看有没有些进步。。。狂谢。。！！！！

第二次写的作文，大家看看有没有些进步。。。狂谢。。！！！！

自从上次第一次写作文深刻感觉到自己的不足时，看过了一些范文，很感谢回复我第一篇作文的人，
你们很热心的帮助我，

  然后总结自己的失误： 1.不知道如何展开论述，以至于不知道写些什么。
                                       2.虽然背了单词，但是用在写作上却好像单词都在脑子里短路了，浮现的都是些基础的词汇，而不知道怎么用一些好的词汇来写。
然后这次又重写了一篇，也用了老师的一些模板，请大家帮忙看看，！谢谢你们了！！这次是OG 185的第二道作文

[b][color=blue]Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.[/color][/b]
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When asked about whether parents are the bestteacher, the vast people believe that they are suitable for children, But otherpeople regard that they are best teacher. I think quite differently. I agreethe later.[/font]
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Perhaps the main reason is that not all ofthe parents are the good teacher to every children. There are a large number ofpeople who as a farmer reside in outskirt, are not systemically receivededucation. Maybe they will use their limited lore to educate children ,but inthese cases, that will be disturb children’s development. However, it is unenviablethat parents more or less have some bad habits which will have a great influenceto childrend.[/font]
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Actually, if parents are qualified as a bestteacher, teacher and school will lose their function in social education. Itwould therefore seem that Parents is making the teacher more and moreredundant.
A crucial element has to beconsidered with teaching. Good teaching will take a favorable surrounding withchildren develop space so that children maybe become a expert in some wisdomarea. If a country lose the fundamental of education, that will be take a[/font]
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Certainly, the effects of social education isnot the sole reason. [/font]
[font=&quot]Moreover,Parents will follow individuals
ideal torequire thire children. When their children do not
obey the instructions, they will be as more andmore rebellious. Even though parents who have a kind-hearted ways to children,they are incapable to endow children advance education. For example,
It is likely that if children doing somethingwrong which parents are not aware it ,eventally will spoilt the children. [/font]
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In a world, it is superficial simply toconsider that the parents are the best teacher. Parents are the supplement andteacher is more essential. Not only parents can employ their thought to helpchildren, but also teacher can indue comprehensive knowledge for children.Techer, as play an important
part of theprofessional role in country, has origin in ancient periods time. From what hasbeen discussed above,we
reasonably reachthe conclusion that parents are not best teacher for children.
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