查看完整版本: 崩溃。。。第一次写作文啊。。。

崩溃。。。第一次写作文啊。。。

[font=宋体]  从来没怎么写过作文，这次写这一篇的时候发现问题很多的，[/font]


[font=宋体]  1.不知道该怎么写啊，好像挤牙膏一样，脑子对着电脑很多词都想不起来，[/font]
[font=宋体]  2.想不出有什么好的例子，好像无话可说一样，[/font]
[font=宋体]  3.写了蛮久。。最后还是凑不到个300字。。。咋办。。。。。
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[font=宋体]   主题：作业是自己写好还是家庭老师陪着好？[/font]


[font=&quot][size=14pt]When[/size][/font][font=&quot][size=14pt] asked about how to do homework well, thevast of people believe that students should do assignment by themselves. But,other people regard students do works better with tutor. I agree the former.[/size][/font]
[font=&quot][size=14pt]Perhaps the mainreason is that students do independently their homework will enhance theirability of study. They will spend more time to solve the problems earnestlywhich difficult to them so that they will have a deep impression. In addition,they will use their initiative to find the key by doing some survey or find upin dictionary.[/size][/font]
[font=&quot][size=14pt]However, if peopledo their homework with tutor, the idea of homework ‘s key maybe not fromthemselves, the tutor will limit student’s idea. Students will become more andmore slothful in their study and rely on tutor.[/size][/font]
[font=&quot][size=14pt]Therefore, Isupports people do their homework by themselves is the best way to help theirstudy and improve their ability.[/size][/font]

第一段基本等于废话……
建议多看看例文吧

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的确先需要多看看范文，看看别人怎么扩展思路的。
你文章只有论点，基本没有论据，也没有例子肯定是不行的。
建议可以先看看写作课堂的其他小马会员每周发上来的作文贴：5月29日作文题11，5月22日作文题10 等
希望给你一些灵感吧。:)