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xionghaotao 2008-5-30 15:15

火烧眉毛了,求救。

下周六考,没有写过一篇作文。
刚才尝试写第一篇独立写作,young people enjoy life more。
痛苦挣扎了半个小时,写了如下内容。


[align=left][font=宋体][size=10pt]Youth is the one of the most precious treasure a person own, and everyonehas only one chance to obtain it. Since it's so valuable that the discussion of how to live a better life inyouth age has never ceased. Some peole argue that young people spend most of their time on doinguseless things just for fun. From my point of view, young peole, generally speaking, do enjoy life morebut there're still some exceptions.[/size][/font][/align]

[align=left][font=宋体][size=10pt] [/size][/font][/align][font=宋体][size=10pt]Firstly, the relatively good physical condition bulid the foundationfor young people to enjoy life more by giving them enormous oppurtunities toexperience things, especially to discover the unknown.According to a latest health conditions survey pubilished in 2007, peolewho are among 15 to 25 years old have the highest health index which means thatthey have the best physical conditions. [/size][/font]

[align=left][font=宋体][size=10pt] [/size][/font][/align][font=宋体][size=10pt]In addtion, since they are very young, most young people[/size][/font]



[align=left]只有155个词,而且给同学看了,发现根本就不切题,我写的是WHY young people enjoy life more, 而不是 Agree OR Disagree[/align]

我的问题主要存在于根本不知道写什么东西。就好比说,如果你给我一篇文章让我翻译,我可能能够翻译出来,但你让我发表自己的看法的时候,我根本就不知道应该怎么组织。即使好不容易想到了POINT,我也很难想到很好的SP

[align=left]怎么办啊。[/align]

[align=left]只有一周时间了,如何快速准备写作啊。[/align]

[align=left]求救,求救。
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wuhao5217195 2008-5-30 16:07

现在网上有185思路总结的
下下来看看
有用的应该~~~

[url]http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/thread-14962-1-1.html[/url]
小艾这个里面有蛮多有用的东西

ngsummer 2008-5-30 16:20

面临同样问题,可惜我明天考。。。
连练习的机会都没有了
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