yuyi 2008-5-21 09:50
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1.People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.PJh`t B1C{
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people attend college or university for different reasons. i think that the 3 most important reasons are the increase of knowlege, new experience of a different academic atmosphere, and the enlargement of my social life. WV*Ff*}z s
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the increase of knowledge ranks first among those 3 reasons.-r$]Yq9b C
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it was regularly belived that girls didnt need to learn as much as boys did before. however, as competitions are getting more fierce, someone who possess more knowledge, especially professional knowledge, will more likely to stand out of millions of competents. therefore, it will help me to create a flatter and wider way to my career life.
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also studnets attend colleges or universities to experience a new environment which is new to them. most students prefer to go far away from there home. so possibly it will be the very first time for sons and daughters to get out their loving families and live on theirselvesR!`tf.G2V2U`
moreover, it could even be the first time when they will meet important crossroads in their lives, they started to think and choice on their own foot.p'e:v.D,K U
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besides, the enlargement of social life, it will be easy to find out quotes about the importance of knowing more people around your circle. because for many years after, they could become one of their business partners, competitors or supervisors.
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personlly speaking, none of the 3 could be left out of. More knowledge would help me to fulfill my data base so that i could use them whenever i need them. meanwhile, approaching to a new place surely could broaden my horizon and help me to cultivate abilities of dealing with people. since i got both academic and interpersonal skills.and by the way i mignt meet someone who could offer me a nice chance.
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