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综合写作模板太长了,请帮忙修改下.

昨天发了个帖子,询问综合写作的模板问题.
各位让我把具体的摸板贴出来.
我用的是庄重的那个.因为没有什么时间准备,也不太知道该怎么准备一个摸板.
In the lecture,the professor argues that (the main idea of the lecture).However,the reading passage contends that(the main idea of the passage).The lecture casts doubts on what the passage indicates.
The first point that the lecture uses to cast doubt on the reading is(point 1 of the lecture).According to the listening passage(detail of point 1 from the lecture).It differs from the reading in that the passage states(point 1 of the reaading)This directly contradicats what the passage indicates.
Another point that the lecture uses to cast doubt on the reading is (point 2 of the lecture)The lecture claims that(details of point 2).However,the reading states(point 2 of the reading).This is another part where listening contradicts the reading.
然后是第三点.
In conclusion,the point in the lecture contrast with the reading.It demonstrates the theory of the reading is in doubt.

另外,我的综合作文第一次只得了fair ,是不是用了摸板的问题啊???我觉得主要观点我都听出来了,细节也听出来基本.
如果要自己改摸板的话,应该怎么改???

你可以先看一下这个贴[url]http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/thread-9931-1-2.html[/url]
尽管里面提供的模板较简短，但是可以借鉴一下。

你的模板根据庄重老师的指导写的确实字数有点多，还且很工整，这样显得模板痕迹比较明显。
不过在综合写作中这并不是说不好，但是在有限的时间里这样写是否会影响你内容的完整和充实。一定切忌听的和阅读的内容是关键，稍稍用模板构建一下就可以了。

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哦,看了你的帖子,谢谢指导.

:lol 顶一个