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[font=Times New Roman]There is always something to take along with that people will put into deliberation for a long trip. It varies a lot for different people as a result of the diverse habits and interests. Many people will choose to bring a cell phone for the consideration to communicate with their family relatives. However, in my view, I prefer to take my personal computer with me during my one year’s trip.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]The most obvious advantage of a PC is that we can surf on the internet to look up some information whevever we need. When we arrive at a new place, we could check the cultures and landscapes those worth visiting on the computer. Since the more I know about the place, the more pleasant visiting I will have. For example, if I arrived at Xi’an, I would check on the internet what are the most notable sights and buildings in this city, as well as find out the famed snack of the city. Depending on the information I get, not only could I see the most representative sightseeing, but also meet my stomach’s satisfactions. Therefore, it is the interest in looking around strange places that makes the PC crucial for my trip.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Besides, I could keep a dairy on the computer. I, personally, like writing down all the stories in my daily life, so that I could look them back to remain me the emotions and feelings I had when I wrote them. Thus, I won’t lose the chance to record all the anecdotes I meet during my one year’s trip. I will describe, in general, the places I visit, the life styles of the local people, my feelings about the place, also with the funny things during the tour. Undoubtedly would it be a nice experience to me.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Another reason why I choose the computer is that I could enjoy the entertainment that the PC provides. Since I will be on a one year’s tour, I may feel tired sometimes. With a computer, I could see a movie, or listen to some music, as well as chat with friends on the internet. Not only will I relax myself, but also obtain a mount of fun.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Numerous benefits are there to bring along a personal computer with me, it is safely to draw the conclusion that a PC will make my one year’s trip amazingly wonderful and will also leave me a lively record of the trip to retrospect.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]There are certain qualities people would like to take into deliberations that to be a good manager.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Some regards acute discernment for a person as the most essential personality while others may choose a person who has a whole perspective on things. As I see it, it is the characters of respecting others, being talented and helpful that will play the most crucial roles on the way of a excellent supervisor.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]In my opinion, an outstanding executive should always respect others. Respect, as we all know, is the basis of the communication between people. Never will a relationship last long without the respect to each other. How could one be a good supervisor without communicate with his/her employee? When the great administer MaYun asked about what is the basic factor to run his business so successfully, he answered it was his staff that are the most vital to the company. He, as well as, mentioned respect is the foundation of the intercourse with the personnel.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Another quality for a manager is that holding the expertise of management. Not only should the knowledge be mastered, but also should the skill be exercised expertly. The manager is a challenging job. Face to the troubles, work out the solutions, then, make the decisions. With the risk of losing the whole business, managers have to firm their determinations right. Consequently, it is obvious that expertise to manager is like the water to the fish, one could not be called a talented manager if lack of professional knowledge and skills.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Significant as the two characters mentioned before, being helpful and kind-hearted is also a considerable factor for a good supervisor. The fact that I am a student just graduate from college now leads me to the short of experiences and confusion of my job. I, as a result, wish my manager helped me out of the troubles I meet in the work. The situation is not only for me, almost all the graduates come to this case. So a topping supervisor would like to give advice to help the staff, which in turn, would benefit the company.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Important though the other characters are such as hard-working, honesty, patience and so on, the three factors I have talked about can not be absent when giving a judgment whether a manager an intelligent one or not. Therefore, I could easily draw the conclusion that being respectful, professionally knowledgeable and helpful is my concern of a first-rank manager.[/font]

你考试的时候，作文分数应该不低，但是你需要注意的是，有些难句的模板你还是背了不少，痕迹很明显

不要用大词难词，用你熟悉的单词和语言来写

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