查看完整版本: 求拍作文 用了个人的例子不知道可不可以

求拍作文 用了个人的例子不知道可不可以

[size=10.5pt][font=Tahoma][size=3]Because people are too busy doing many things, they can do few things well. Do you agree or disagree?[/size][/font][/size]
[font=Tahoma][size=3]Today, with the process of modernization and informatization, our life becomes much easier than ever before as we have a variety of things to do. For example, the advent of the vehicles enables us to go faster and farther: the invention of the cell phones minimizes the distance between people. Thus, we are always faced up with multiple choices. Some may maintain that we can do many things well at the same as we are always keeping doing them, however, I could not help but believe that we can do few things perfectly if we doing many things coinstantaneous in a hurry.[/size][/font]
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[size=10.5pt][font=Tahoma][size=3]Here I would explain my reasons. The most important reason for my trend is that we will feel tired, totally exhausted when doing lots of things persistently. One of my best friend Sherry could be a vivid example. Nowadays, she is applying for high school in the United States. As many other students who want to further study in the US, she has to take the toefl and ssat test and at the same time the academic study in her own school. I noticed that she looked so painful and was absolutely differ from what she used to be , shiny and vigorous. I learned that she could only sleep for only three or four hours a day because of the time consuming preparation for the tough tests, which deprived her energy and smile. Someone may wonder what is the outcome of her hard working. Unfortunately , she failed to get offers that meet to her needs. From this instance, it is true that we may ended up gaining nothing or totally losting ourselves if doing a lost of things at one time. Energy for one’s life is limited, if depleted we will gain nothing.[/size][/font][/size]
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[font=Tahoma][size=3]Another equally significant role of my propensity is that we may endure much pressure and anxious if busy doing several tasks. Recently, I heard of an astonishing news from the China Daily that is several white collars suicide one after another in a Fortune 5oo Company. It is reported that 5 employees took their own lives for the reason that they were unable to bear excessive stress both physically and mentally. Some other employees claim that the competition from peer is intense that they are always overwhelmed by numerous projects at the same time. In order to be more excellent in the company , they always overwork and keep promoting themselves. Thus those who can not endure such onerous work choose to escape from the pressure and suicide. Consequently, we ought to have a reasonable plan for our work , doing tasks one by one and relax ourselves properly.[/size][/font]
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[color=black][size=10.5pt][font=Tahoma][size=3]Finally, as a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. I admit that there are couple advantages of doing many different things, such as one can fully experience pleasure of doing all a variety of things like doing a field trip, writng a paper or being a submariner in a aquarium. However, the advantages of doing one or two things at one time is more obviously.[/size][/font][/size][/color]
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[color=black][size=10.5pt][font=Tahoma][size=3]If all the factors above are considered, I may come to the conclusion that keep doing many tasks could not be a wise decision. By contrast , it is better to do just a few things and learn how to relax and yourself while struggling in life.[/size][/font][/size][/color][size=10.5pt][/size]

很不错，个人例子可以用