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小女子陋作，麻烦大家帮忙拍拍，谢谢了！：）

The books are divided into two sorts, one is fiction (story or novel), and another is non-fiction. Do you prefer to read fiction or non-fiction?

In modern society, with the growing of economy there have lots of competitions that consist in every aspect and that become further fierce. As a result, people who enhance their abilities by studying and learning continually could live in the society. Therefore, I'm in favor with those books that could lift my working capacity.

Nowadays, lots of companies recruit people who specialize in certain area. However, in the time of changing and developing constantly, technologies in any field are renewed in every hour, even every minute. As long as study consecutively by reading those books that are beneficial to our skills of working, person could catch the pace of the time. Simultaneous, the useful books could promote our efficiency in working to learning subtle crafts introduced in books. As the old saying is that there have no progress that is equal to retrogress. People who always step in the same place will lose not only their opportunities now, but their futures as some certain newly technology they can not grasped, other people fail to work with them. And then, the chances that participated in the important work will far away from them which will change their whole lives.

Besides, the rivals brought about the youth that graduated from universities are another reason that we are supposed to read more practical books. The freshmen firstly come to the society maybe have no experiences, but there are endless passion and numerous spirit in their mind, and the most importance is that they grasp the newest technology in their special realm. If people who worked for several years do not learn more knowledge through books about their working, the replacement with youth is probability. Reading books to improve working’s ability is the only way to enhance a person’s competitive power. Therefore, the useful books could take a number of merits in the process of working.

The books used to kill times also, nevertheless, have benefits to people for the way combined studying with entertainment is the most efficient and effective approach to obtain knowledge. On the other hand, the time used to reading story books should be restricted that we could have sufficient times to learn more knowledge via those useful books. In conclusion, the books of practice are useful to our life and appeal to me.

[[i] 本帖最后由 yoyo 于 2008-5-1 12:20 编辑 [/i]]

第一段里的最后一句应该是"in favor of "
the replacement with youth is probability。应该是probable吧，probablity 是名词

The books used to kill times also。应该改成"are used to "

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谢谢2楼的～～:)
后面的怎么呗屏蔽了？