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[color=black][size=11.5pt][font=Times New Roman][size=6]Do you agree or disagree: People can learn more from watching television than reading books.[/size]
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[/font][/size][font=宋体]电视[/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体]形象[/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体]生动[/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]    [/font][/size][font=宋体]但不让思考[/font][/size][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]
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[/size][/font][/size][size=5][font=宋体]提高[/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]IQ [/font][/size][font=宋体]深邃[/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]    [/font][/size][font=宋体]思考[/font][/size][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]
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[/font][/size][size=5][font=宋体]结语[/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman] books are [/font][/size][font=宋体]进步阶梯[/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][/size][/color]
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[font=Times New Roman][color=black][size=5][size=6]          There is a controversially debate on whether people can learn more from watching television than reading books. Obviously ,consisted with that people can learn more from watching television are those people who hold the opinion that watching television makes learning become easier and more available From my point of view, considerable though the advantages that watching television for study enjoys are , they can not compete with benefits that reading books brings about , when disadvantage of watching TV and the contribution of reading books are taken into deliberation.[/size]
[size=6]           First of all, some minor advantages of watching TV for study enjoys include vivid pictures and no requirement for some background knowledge . For instance , my grandmother is a illiterate because she didn’t have a chance to receive education ,but it isn’t difficulty for her to get involved in the situation in entertainment programmes and even to know some global events on CCTV one . On the other hand , an afficiency of watching TV is rather obvious .As is evidenced in findings released by healthy magazine, people would stay unthinking stage when they enjoy the programmes . if too often people face the screen , the amount of nervous cell will dramatically decrease . In short , watching TV might do some harm to our body rather than teach us more things .[/size]
[size=6]               Fortunately , reading may improve our IQ and EQ rather than killing our nervous cell. A recent investigation conducted by the human organization demonstrates that more than eighty percent of knowledge is achieved from books , and reading contributes a lot to society civilization . At the same time , reading book make us thinking deeper into essence which the author often conceal with some simple phenomena such as Tom uncle’s Cabin .The more people think , the more they get . So there is on doubt that reading is the key to development of society .[/size]
[size=6]             Another advantage that reading books brings about is that reading gets more specialized knowledge than does watching TV .For example , college students almost get specialized knowledge through reading one or more filed books and journals , not watching TV . Conversely, If colleges merely provide many cinemas in stead of libraries, just imagine what a horrible thing can occur ? and how do students deal with some specialized matters? So only in the means of reading can we become specialist in some field which we are really interesting in .[/size]
[size=6]               Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of watching TV for study , I maintain that its advantages means nothing when its disadvantages is mentioned , while the benefits that reading books causes is far more obvious . Just as Gorki said, book is the stepping stone of the development of human kind. Not one can deny the contribution of reading
books in the human history and the more people can absorb from reading rather than watching TV[/size]
[/size][/color][/font][size=6][color=red][font=宋体]用了[/font][font=Times New Roman]40[/font][font=宋体]分钟[/font][/color][/size][font=Times New Roman]
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[size=6][color=red][font=宋体]没用强调句[/font][font=Times New Roman]   [/font][font=宋体]没用到插入语[/font][font=Times New Roman]     [/font][font=宋体]同义替换没做好[/font][font=Times New Roman] [/font][font=宋体]没用到林肯[/font][font=Times New Roman]                          [/font][font=宋体]下回改进[/font][font=Times New Roman]       [/font][font=宋体]请各位教徒[/font][font=Times New Roman]  [/font][font=宋体]帮帮[/font][font=Times New Roman]  [/font][font=宋体]改一下[/font][/color][/size][font=Times New Roman]      [/font]

[[i] 本帖最后由 走聪明 于 2008-4-27 16:24 编辑 [/i]]

[size=5][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]Do u agree or disagree: Because people are busy with doing so many things, they can do few things well?

[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]如何破题[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]  [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]不太会破这种题[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]   [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]大家请教了[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]     [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]关键词[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]they
[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]不然会跑题（戴云说的）[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][/size][/size]
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[size=5][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]   [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]开头（废话一下[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]  [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]然后明确自己观点）[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]   [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]让步一下[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]某些人可能是强人（算了[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman], [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]不让了）[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]

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[size=5][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]也是随便挑的[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]1
[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]没有精力[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]
[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]，[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]  [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]没精力[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]怎么能做好事[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]

lake of energy
distract your [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]精力[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][/size][/size]
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[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]复杂会混淆[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]

[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]混淆会把事情[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]mess [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]掉[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]

too complex
confuse themselves [/font][/size][/size]
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[size=5][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]3 [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]损坏身体健康[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]    [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]（比较牵强[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]  [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]用黄二随便挑的）[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]

do harm to physical and mental health
may be crazy [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]掉[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][/size][/size]
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[size=5][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]总结上文[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]   [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]结语一下[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][/size][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=12pt][size=5]         Whether people can do few things well if they are busy with doing so many things , different people will have different ideas due to their own experience . As for me I strongly agree with this idea and the reasons are as follows.[/size][/size][size=12pt][size=5]
             Firstly, to do so many things at the same time will distract their energy and attention, so how can they do any thing well with limited power and time ? as is evidenced in findings released by healthy magazine, there might be more possibilities of making errors when people feel tired in the work , especially in airplane company . The airplane companies have a set of working rules which mainly limit the working hour of every crew . because a lot of accidents are caused by careless due to fatigue of crews. So it is impossible for people to handle and deal with every thing well at the same time. [/size][/size]
[size=12pt][size=5]          Secondly, many things needed to cope with instimulately will disrupt the normal orders of mind and life of people. As the old saying goes , the better schedule we have , the more achievements we will enjoy. Some people ,however ,ignore this rule of life. they hold that the potential of human are so great that one man can control many things at the same time . My cousin Jim, for example, always regard himself as superior man . and he took eight courses in a semester when he was junior at college . but unfortunately he got 8 D at final exams because he confuse some concepts among this courses .In short, to deal with so many thing at limited time is too complex a task for human./[/size][/size][size=12pt][size=5]
       Last but not least, too often busy with doing so many things , nobody could keep sound health including both physical and mental aspects. According to a new latest scientific record , it is rather suitable for human work seven hours and two matters at most every day , which means that working on so many things will do harm to our physical and mental health , and even cause psychological problem .Therefore it is not reality for people to have sound building to operate more things for a long time .[/size][/size]
[size=12pt][size=5]         In conclusion, people might not do anything well if they instimulately deal with so many things from the above prospective. People’s energy , time and attention are limited , while there are countless matters needed to cope with every day. Considering health and the efficiency of work , people should make a detailed plan for fairs that should be done everyday .[/size][/size][/font]

[[i] 本帖最后由 走聪明 于 2008-4-27 18:19 编辑 [/i]]

又占   :hug:

好了  够了

[size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today than in the past, agree or disagree?
[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]如何破题              这题我不会[/size][/font][size=10.5pt][/size]

[[i] 本帖最后由 走聪明 于 2008-4-27 18:37 编辑 [/i]]

明天我来看。

怎么没来啊

[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]Conclusion:[/font][/size]
[font=宋体][size=14pt]中心思想还可以深入展开阐述，不需要被模板所左右。[/size][/font][size=14pt][/size]
[font=宋体][size=14pt]有些例子和支持段落还需修改，使其更有说服力。[/size][/font][size=14pt][/size]
[font=宋体][size=14pt]语言注意多样性，并不需要一味追求长句复杂句，这样容易犯语法错误。可以适当改变句型。另外就是有些小的语法错误，望仔细查看，做出修正。[/size][/font][size=14pt][/size]

:( :( :(           我等你

呵呵，好的！

[quote]原帖由 [i]heqiongsophie[/i] 于 2008-4-28 23:14 发表 [url=http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=140159&ptid=12041][img]http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
Conclusion:
中心思想还可以深入展开阐述，不需要被模板所左右。
有些例子和支持段落还需修改，使其更有说服力。
语言注意多样性，并不需要一味追求长句复杂句，这样容易犯语法错误。可以适当改变句型。另外就是有 ... [/quote]


对  说到我心里去了   平生就没写几篇作文，   现在完全靠大家的鼓励 才写的，       我很不喜欢模板     但不用 不会写，   我很表达我的想法    但功底还不够

我最想说服 别人   但有时我都无法说服自己                  怎么办

[[i] 本帖最后由 走聪明 于 2008-4-29 01:11 编辑 [/i]]

对于第一篇：
详细批注看下面链接：

第二篇：
你的思路是：

Do u agree or disagree: Because people are busy with doing so many things, they can do few things well?
如何破题  不太会破这种题   大家请教了     [color=red]关键词they----
[/color]不然会跑题（戴云说的）
   开头（废话一下  然后明确自己观点）   让步一下 某些人可能是强人（算了, 不让了）

也是随便挑的1
没有精力
，  没精力 怎么能做好事
lake of energy
distract your 精力
2
复杂会混淆
混淆会把事情mess 掉
too complex
confuse themselves
3 损坏身体健康    （比较牵强  用黄二随便挑的）
do harm to physical and mental health
may be crazy 掉
总结上文   结语一下

Para1

    Whether people can do few things well if they are busy with doing so many things , different people will have different ideas due to their own experience . As for me I strongly agree with this idea and the reasons are as follows. [color=red]----(what idea??)[/color]
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Para2

   Firstly, to do so many things at the same time will distract their energy and attention, so how can they do any thing well with limited power and time ? as is evidenced in findings released by healthy magazine, there might be more possibilities of making errors when people feel tired in the work , especially in airplane company . The airplane companies have a set of working rules which mainly limit the working hour of every crew . because[color=red]_--去掉because[/color] a lot of accidents are caused by careless due to fatigue of crews. So it is impossible for people to [color=red]handle and deal----(取其中一个，避免wordy[/color]) with every thing well at the same time.

para3

   Secondly, many things needed to cope with instimulately will disrupt the normal orders of mind and life of people. As the old saying goes , the better schedule we have , the more achievements we will enjoy. Some people ,however ,ignore this rule of life. they hold that the potential of human are so great that one man can[color=red] control--改为handle[/color] many things at the same time . My cousin Jim, for example, always regard himself as [color=magenta]superior man[/color][color=red]---how about superman?_?[/color] . and he took eight courses in a semester when he was junior at college . but unfortunately he got 8 D at final exams because he confuse some concepts among this courses .In short, to deal with [color=red]so many thing[/color] at limited time[color=red] is[/color] too complex a task for human[color=red]./最后两句语法错误：名词单复数[/color]

总结：
     in my opinion,全篇的关键词应当出现[color=magenta]balanced,[/color]however,unluckily我没找到。
      有些句子或词作同义替代是可以的，但不要两个都放上去，那时多余的话。注意语法名词单复数问题。
      另外你写的这篇文章的主题基本是我们[color=magenta]424发布的作文题 [color=#000000][url=http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/thread-11941-1-1.html]http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/thread-11941-1-1.html[/url][/color][/color]。
所以以后遇到类似话题跟帖在“大家一起写” 中，方便大家交流和批阅。

Whether people can do few things well if they are busy with doing so many things , different people will have different ideas due to their own experience . As for me I strongly agree with this idea and the reasons are as follows. ----(what idea??)     谢谢 该打   

版主  不好意思   我 5  4 就考    现在 选做机经题做  （自己预测的:lol :lol ）    还有点赶口语    可能没时间做了    过了  5  4 肯定 来做作业           对了请教一句  这两篇 哪篇好    个人看好 第二篇

看了   斑竹  改的第一篇     感动    可见斑竹功底深厚          :Q :Q :Q :Q :Q       大家下着看     很有裨益

好了  告诉大家我的秘密    我预测机经只有3 篇    加上从京竹 老师 选来 3篇      故此   我预测  54   2006  12.1     12.15    12.8     2007  1.27   200 7  2.3  2007  3.3   :lol :lol :lol :lol                 大家 只当 笑话哦   不要但真

好了  仔细  研究  斑竹的批阅     发现  斑竹爱用    小词     谢谢 有多了一种方法