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最近刚写的作文， 麻烦哪位老师or大哥大姐改一下

[font=Calibri]Psychologists who consider one study by himself/herself or under professor’s directions, it depends on different level to comprehend subject that they learn, especially undergraduate and more than that.
It doesn’t means that traditional education of relation has been overwhelmed and has less impact on students’ study than before .Undeniably, teacher and professor have extremely significant position on educational circle and at least can help student who lose their study way and effectively discover distorted and delusive knowledge, it’s the best accustomed solution to change fraud in study .[/font]
[font=Calibri]The best to learn that be limited is the best to have a teacher in general. For instance, mostly parents believe that students with good quality are based on having a teacher, and ignore children’s self-taught faculty. Moreover, the credit of getting perfect grade that is potentially transferred to teacher. Not only does it hit children’s self-confidence to their study ability, but also gradually spoil their capacity of self-study. So leaving more space of self-study is very crucial education, which guardian should especially care for.[/font]
[font=Calibri]Some students can’t concentrate on what professor talk about in some subject, and effectively study by themselves, no doubt choosing self-study is a good way to get higher grades. For example, history of grand events including concrete place and period of the events are not needed by teacher mention in the lecture.[/font]
[font=Calibri]The normal question and vital point in study professors can clearly point out is so beneficial to student and make him/her keep more time. Furthermore, if someone lose their orientation of life and study , mostly professor like free psychologists objectively analyze the question and encourage them to advance.[/font]
[font=Calibri]In the conclusion, supervisors should leave more space of self-study, trust them .it’s not hard to get perfect grade with professor’s support and endeavor by students.[/font]

题目

题目 ： some people think that they can learn better by themsevles than with a teacher . others think that it is always better to have a teacher . Which do your prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay

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自学好还是和老师学习好？