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5.17想组个3人队，互相批改作文，招募两人！

每周四的作文题目中， 发了没人给改，很郁闷，:'(  在此招募2人组成3人小分队，嘿嘿，:lol 互相批改作文。有意者请跟帖。
要求： 只要2人，组成3 人的队；
             定出题目；
            定时提交一篇作文，2天之内队员互相修改，提出评价及建议；
            最好也是5.17考滴，嘿嘿；
有想加入的请跟帖，这两天就组起来吧。我在其中选择2名，其他的请自己组队（不知道能不能凑起人来），就要2人，多了没时间互相改。:D 时间不多了。共同提高！:handshake :victory: :hug:

额``偶想加入啦
现在也苦恼于作文的问题`
和楼主一样 `5月17号考。重庆大学考场。`

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两位同学，咱们明天（04.25）写这篇文章吧，明天就把这篇文章发上来，在下面跟帖。后天一天把对其他两人的修改意见也贴出来吧。当然最好对自己文章的优点也说一说，方便我们互相认识到对方的优点，呵呵，加油！奋战05.17！！:handshake :victory:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, student nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

晚了一天写出来，:'( :'( :'(


No one can deny the influence that the technology has brought to human beings, and just with the help of technology, people can obtain unmatched achievement. It also can not be neglected the considerable impact the technology has on the students because it enables them to learn more information and learn it more quickly. As far as I am concerned, I strongly advocate the above statement.
Information technology, one of kind of technologies, provides us the huge amount of information. With the help of computer and this technology, we can have more accesses to a multitude of information around us as well as the world. Internet itself is a vast ocean of natural and social science. For example, in the past, students can only get information from the newspapers, books, or from others. All of these ways of gaining information mean that they can only get information from prearranged ways. While computer and internet technology can provide us the latest and maybe any kind of information from all kinds of areas we need.
Additionally, students can more easily and quickly learn the certain information and knowledge they need to study. With the help of the technology, studying is no more a tedious task but a enjoyable and meaningful process for a majority of students as well as most people. Students will tend to study it more actively and positively with a high efficiency. For instance, students major in geology in the past have to read a substantial amount of books and other literal materials to understand the actual conditions of the underground, but now, the conditions of the underground can be showed to students on the computer in the forms of images or videos through the stimulation technology.
Currently, technology has gained a significant development, and I believe that it will be more beneficial for the students to get an increasing help and benefits from the technology.

你们互改这样也挺好。

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没人顶？:'( :Q :(

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63. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

Nearly no one can deny the considerable influence that failure or the difficult time has ever brought to us. Although everyone who has these kinds of situation do not like to experience them again, it has to admitted that, it is just the difficult time or experience that make offer us the valuable and cherished lessons. As far as I am concerned, I am forever in favor of the difficult time in our life.

The main reason for my inclination for the difficult time is that I regard it as one necessary part of our life. Without them, our life will not be a complete and meaningful process. Everyone dream the kind of life in which there are full of happiness, luck, and beauty without failures, depression and frustration. However, even if this dream can be realized, can people who live in always feel happy? They will also feel their life boring because they have never experienced difficult time. Therefore, only the difficult time can make us recognize the mean of the life, which is the one part of our life.

Another equally essential reason accounting for my penchant is that the difficult time can serve as a way of improvement of our life and, in some degree, a prerequisite of our success and achievement. Because it can offer us an access to the deeper and more comprehensive understanding of the problems we are dealing with. For example, the paper for every graduate is a huge challenge and they have to prepare the final paper for nearly one semester, and then take the final exam. Only passing the process, students can eventually get their diploma.

From what has been discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that the difficult time of our life enables us an access to realize the true meaning of life and will bring enormous benefits to our career development and achievement. All the experiences in the difficult time will become the most cherished and valuable lessons in our life.

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我是5 31的 想跟你组队 你人招满了吗？