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[font=宋体][size=5]从远到近，由大到小，谈论紧扣论题的社会观点作为背景[/size][/font]
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[b][size=5][color=red][font=宋体]把对方的优点移植到己方，把己方的观点消灭掉，提出实施方案和注意事项[/font][/color][color=red][/color][/size][/b]Z4SG4bUI,r%_-Eos,B
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[b][size=5][color=blue][font=宋体]⑷使用全新的表达法进行替换[/font][/color][color=blue][/color][/size][/b]4@ e-Ql1M X
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[size=5][color=#424242][font=Times New Roman]Though the advantages that [u]living in outside the campus[/u] enjoys are considerable, they can not compete with the benefits that l[u]iving in inside the campus brings about[/u], when safety is taken into consideration.([/font][/color][color=#424242][font=宋体]通常用在第一段的最后一句话提出文章论点和理由，[/font][/color][color=#424242][font=Times New Roman]2[/font][/color][color=#424242][font=宋体]－[/font][/color][color=#424242][font=Times New Roman]1[/font][/color][color=#424242][font=宋体]文章的承上启下部分或文章的结尾[/font][/color][color=#424242][font=Times New Roman]) ---------------------------- considerable though the advantages that [u]living in outside the campus[/u] enjoys are, they can not compete with the benefits that l[u]iving in inside the campus brings about[/u], when safety is taken into consideration. [/font][/color][/size]
R [2`O!ufoe [b][size=5][color=fuchsia][font=宋体]⑥表示否定的副词或短语＋助动词＋主语＋谓语＋其他成分[/font][/color][color=fuchsia][/color][/size][/b]
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