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不好意思,我知道这有点离题。刚刚帮忙一个同学写一个英语比赛的自我介绍,说要和奥运有关的。所以写了下面这段,请大家改改。(虽然不是托夫的,不过大作文也是从小作文练起嘛! 声明一下,我只是个高中生,所以水平有点低,对不起了!还有就是那搞是一分钟的,所以有点短)
[font=Times New Roman]Hi! Everyone! My name is Wang Si from Class1, Grade 10. I’m very glad to be here to introduce myself. Since I was very young, I’m a girl with double characters. Sometimes I am active and sometimes I am kind of shy and quiet. It depends on what situation I’m in. But no matter how, I’m always that tough, brave and confident. As It’s 2008 now, August 8th is getting closer and closer. And everybody knows that it’s the time when China will hold the Olympic game. Being a high school student as I am, maybe I don’t have the skills and strength to win honor for our motherland like the athletics. Maybe I don’t have a chance to be a volunteer to do whatever I can for the Olympic game. But I believe I have the spirit of Olympic, which is higher swifter and stronger. In my student career, I face every difficulty bravely like Liu Xiang jumps over every hurdle, and I believe I can end up successfully like he does.  That's me, the brave, confident girl form Class1,Grade10. Thank you![/font]
[font=Times New Roman]还有一个句子我不会翻译!大家帮忙[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]年轻的我,那圣火般的青春活力时刻展示者我坚强,勇敢,自信的一面![/font]
[font=Times New Roman]谢谢大家![/font]
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