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tomato-joyce 2008-4-10 22:47

一篇作文,拍死我吧,反正我也已经被作文折磨要死了

[size=4]Some people prefer to live in a big city because they could have more opportunities to approach the modern and hich-tech things.However,as far as i am concerned,the small town is much bettter foe the following reasons.[/size]
[size=4]  first of all,as we all know,we could live a life full of convenience and enjoyment in a small town.In the street,there are not so many cars which have already been considered a big threat for people'3 lives in rencent years.It is said that there are as many as thousands of people who die of traffic accidents every day in the word .The victim is definitely bring a lot of sorrow to the whole family.Many parentd are so sad that suffer from severe mental disorder.what's more ,the traffic jam is also a big headache.I believe most people have encounted such a situation :the cad drives much slower than the bicycle in the rush-hour.this of course bring a lot unconvenience for people who is going to participate in a meeting or who need first aid.However,such scenes almost couldn't happenin a small town.[/size]
[size=4]second ,the relationship betweenpeople is more harmonious in a small town.the residents are familiar with each other very well.when one people fall into difficulties,the other people would give her a hand at once,both materially and mentally.For examle,when  a disabled widowcome down with a flu badly,the neighbours wouldhelp her with heart.some may cook delicious food for her to enhance her physical quality ,others may chat with her to relieve her concerns about disease.in this way ,the neibours are just like the relativesof the old lonely lady[/size]
[size=4]   of course ,living in big city also has its relative merits.for example ,people could face more challenges and  opportunities in finding a satisfied job and make more money[/size]
[size=4]    however,when all these factors are concerned,the advantages of living in a small town carry moreweights than living in a big city.as a result i prefer to live in a small town rather than live in a big city[/size]

tomato-joyce 2008-4-10 22:51

说说我的问题吧.我感觉句子较简单,见到一个题目是思路较乱,请大家帮帮我好吧

heqiongsophie 2008-4-11 15:21

写作没有这么痛苦吧。Enjoy the process of writing~]
最好跟帖--每周大家一起写,
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