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老师，作文题以后都不放了是吗？

是啊,我就靠这个练手呢啊~~~看来都太忙了~~~唉

老师们也很忙呵
我们自己写了放上来吧~~

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不是还是会继续发放, 只是如何发放作文我们还在调整,我们打算让大家都参与进来, 现在还是看的人多, 写的人少, 改的人更少,  我的网这两天断了刚恢复, 估计新的通告马上就下来了,  sophie的网晚上慢, 大家的留言可能她都要白天挤时间恢复, 大家耐心等待

wait Sophie~

[[i] 本帖最后由 Seabiscuit 于 2008-4-1 19:22 编辑 [/i]]

Thanks for all your supporting. I'm moved..:)
Several days ago there was one problem with my computer.
The new notice and topic for this week will be post on this Thursday according the decision of our xiaoma managerial levels. Please wait and practice all the time.

好的呵  
辛苦了哈~~~~~
:lol

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Land problem is currently of great concern to the nation, to the world and to all the human beings. Because of the scarcity of the land, it is a difficult issue for a city to decide whether they should destroy the historic buildings and replace them with modern buildings or not. From my personal angle alone, we must selectively preserve our old, historic buildings which represent our countries’ cultures and histories.
    On one hand, historic building is a manifestation of national cultural heritage. Take the Forbidden City in Beijing as an example; it is the palace where emperor lives. It recorded history over hundreds of years of China. One foreign friend of mine said after he visited the Forbidden City he could feel the flavor of the ancients, see the life style of ancients and know more deep culture of China. If the Forbidden City is destroyed and we can just see it from the book or internet, we will never know how grand it is and how stately it is.
    On the other hand, there are more and more tourists these years and historic building is a most important part in our tourism. For example, growth in the number of the tourists who came to China and visited the Great Wall has tripled over the last year which makes a tremendous contribution to the tourism. If we destroy these historic buildings the tourism must be influence and it will be a pity for all the people who can’t see these constructions.
    But not all of the historic buildings are as important as those above. Some historic buildings which have no representations can be destroyed by the city, for we can use the land to do a lot of things to improve our living standards.
    In conclusion, though some historic buildings can be replaced by the modern buildings, the most important constructions which are the crystal of the wisdom of our ancestor and which represents the culture of our countries must be protected. We must find a point of balance between preserving the historic buildings and building new modern buildings

waiting~~~:)

起来之后睡不着了，昨天被拒的非常不爽。。我也来一篇 ＝ ＝。。  
 I grew up in Beijing, a beautiful ancient city of more than a thousand years.  I love it.  Over the thousand years it has accumulated a unique culture and landscape.  There are antique buildings around every corner; there are world famous historic structures scattered all over the city.      

The Forbidden City tells you how powerful the empire once was.  The Great Wall, snaking several thousand miles across the mountains for tens of centuries, tells the stories of the soldiers defending their country and people day and night in the snow and ice generation after generation.  I was singly lucky to be born in this city.  I spent my childhood wandering around this amazing city like in a wonderland.    

Recently, something threaten to strip the city of its beauty, and more. That is the environmental problem which caused by the modern buildings and automobiles. Spring is a time when Beijing is at its peak of beauty, with the trees sprouting and the birds chirping.  Yet now it is the season of air pollution. The release of large amounts of carbon dioxides by the modern industries in the form of Global warming endangered people's health, conspicuously, balefully.       

The unreasonable seeking for new land lead to modern buildings put into the wrong place. April 17th of last year saw 300,000 tons of sand and dirt dumped on this ancient city overnight. The storm blanketed the whole city.  Every centimeter of the city was covered with a couple of centimeters of dirt.  Everyone had to stay inside to breathe.       

Today Beijing has turned itself from a historic site into an urban place, and we have to admit that modern buildings are the basic requirement for the development of Technology. If the environment protection has been borne in mind, we will protect our land unconsciously or subconsciously, and once again, this city will be my wonderland.   


word count:308写得比较烂 字也很少 欢迎狂拍～ many thanks!

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以前就看过LS的范文呵~~

语言真不错~~学习！
The release of large amounts of carbon dioxides by the modern industries in the form of Global warming endangered people's health, conspicuously, balefully.
后面3个词觉得有些问题呵  又说不清`````
觉得后半部分没扣住老建筑写
拍错勿怪哈~~

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many thanks!

范文的话就差远了。呵呵。。

[size=14pt][font=Calibri]Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?[/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Calibri]It is not rare to see that old, historic buildings are destroyed in order to build new and modern ones. Some people insist on replacement of the old buildings, for the reason that a building constructed several centuries ago is not strong enough to support itself and may cause damage to citizens. The idea is strongly opposed by people who indicate that it is a money-consuming project to rebuild modern buildings, especially skyscrapers, and old buildings, which symbolize different periods of development of the city, are historic sites of significant value to preserve. From my perspective, I totally agree with the latter idea.[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Calibri]No issue is more crucial than the one that construction of modern buildings would cost plenty of money which is sure a heavy burden for the local government. No one can deny that it is more essential to solve problems such as protecting forests from disappearance. As far as I am concerned, deforestation would cause a series of other damages like animals’ extinction due to destruction of their habitats. Consequently, from my own viewpoint, the big sum of money would be better invested into such areas mentioned above, which is meaningful to our world.[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Calibri]Historic value is another head and chief reason I prefer to put here. Old buildings are often associated with impressive events in the past such as war and peace, struggling for independence, scientific achievements. To give as a demonstration, in America, the building where Lincoln’s office located would recall people living in the duration of civil war memories of the fierce and cruel scenes in order to emancipate the slaves. When people are reminded of the war, they might be shocked in the heart and have a deep feeling how precious today’s life is! Therefore, such buildings act as a positive educational role in promoting democracy and world peace.[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Calibri]Though preservation of old building enjoys numerable advantages, it also has its own demerit. Old buildings, which aged at least several centuries, tend to be vulnerable through decades of erosion from chemical substance, such as various types of acids. It is a hazardous threat to people’s security of life and treasure because it may collapse at some day! [/font][/size]
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[font=Calibri][size=14pt]All in all, though the advantages of constructing modern buildings enjoys are considerable, it cannot compete with the benefits preservation of old ones leads to, when the two main reasons mentioned above are taken into consideration. S[/size][font=Calibri][size=14pt]ome people may still remain unconvinced, the reasons I have analyzed could at least make them more aware of the various dimensions of the issue under discussion.[/size][/font][size=14pt] In fact, not only do I prefer to preserve old buildings, but also prefer to renew those which are not strong enough to hold itself and may break down one day.[/size][/font]
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非常赞同 198一点 不爽时凭感觉来篇作文 我也有次习惯啊 哈哈
文章还没看 先占楼

Many cities that have old, historic buildings confront such a choice, whether these buildings should be replaced with modern ones. It makes controversy among people. Some civilians cited that these old buildings have identified the history of the city. Thus the administration should pay more attention and more money to preserve these buildings for such reasons as follows:
These buildings are very rare due to that they are evidences of history. For example, some buildings are the prisons that the colonists built during the war. The buildings are the evidences to illustrate and make all the people in the world never forget that period of time so that they will more treasure the present piece and avoid another war to happen. And some other buildings are the sites that are built hundreds of years ago where a king lived there. So they are good places where experts all over the word to study that period of history. How exiting it is to know the past when we did not exist on the earth. In brief, the value of old buildings cannot be measured with money.
Moreover, the historic buildings can attract people outside the country to visit the buildings and lead large income for the city. For instance, two thirds of the income of the city that I live comes from the traveling referring to old buildings. Thus, you can see that the old buildings can help the city to construct its economic system.
However, the historic buildings also bring some challenges to the city because of its high cost of preservation. It is the main reason why the administration wants to destroy these building and build modern ones. Yet it is obviously that once old buildings were destroyed, it would hardly be repaired. And the cost of preservation can be covered by the income of the visiting referring to the old buildings. Thus it is superficial for the administration to determine to replace the old buildings for a short –time profit without carefully consideration.
To sum up, it is clear that the old historic buildings should be carefully preserved because of their value of both history and economics.
今天写的第二篇，感觉用词还是幼稚了，不过也是一个多小时的成果。请很批，多谢:) 。

练习`

While  television  has  been  some  what  negative  infurence  of  our  lives . but  presum  that  mention  the
television  has  destoryed  communication  among  friends  and  family , personally  this  opinion  is  worng  .
Actually, television  has  facilitate  communication  among  people . Through  watching  TV , people  who  acquire
more  information , and  people  possess  more  topics  to  talk  about .

  Undeniable , television  to  liberal  our  lives , we  must  be  admission  watching  TV  is  a  primary  part  of  our
daily  life . Watching  television  provides  happy  and  relaxed  to  us . Addition , television  progams  has  encou
-rage . Communication  amongy  people . Tow  year  ago  summer , I  with  some  friends  through  the  television
to  watch  the  the  world  cup , football  games  was  wonderful  and  exciting . World  cup  become  a  common
-ication  and  we  obtain  joy .

  On  the  other  hand  television  program  can  provides  some  advices  to  encourage  communication  among  
people . Last  summer  hoilday , I  saw  a  television  program , this  program  introdeed a  small  town  located
in  France . The  place  is  beautiful , so  I  decided  with  my  friends  to  the  small  towm  for  travel . Our  like
this  small  towm  because  it  has  very  charming  ocean  view . I  mean  the  sky  there  is  so  blue  and  the
beach  is  alway  full  sunshine  of  the  beach , when  the  sun  is  setting  down , when  the  ocean  breeze  is  
blowing  and  seabirds  are  singing . Of  couse  we  like  this  small  French  town  also  because  there  are  
many  great  French  restallrants . They  offer  the  best  seafood  in  the  world  like  lobsters  and  tuna  frishes .
We  are  enjoy  this  French  small  towm . This  trip  to  facilitate  the  communication  between  us .

  Finally , the  television  urge  people  to  communication  with  the  otherone  although  sometimes  the  televisio
-n  program  inevitable  tigger  negative  effect , nonetheless  television  is  have  positive  significantce  for  people
life . Therefore , I  disagree  that  television  has  destroy  communication  among  friend  and  family .

``写过``

Regarding  should  historic  buildings  be  preserved  or  be  replaced  with  modern  buildings , frankly  speackin
-g , either  presrved  old  buildings  or  destroy  them  and  replace  them  with  modern  buildings , we  must  
admission  mordern  buildings  comfortable  life  to  us , tradition  architecture  mean  intellgence  out  it's  signific
-antly  inheritance . Personally  I  prefer  mention  should  historic  buildings  be  preserved .

  Undeniable , tradition  architecture  has  especially  charm , persume  them  sustain  destroy  will  trigger  cann
-ot  be  recalled  loss , and  human  will  loss  principar  inheritance . Last  summer , I  went  a  small  town  in
south  China  for  travel , the  small  town  located  in  Anhui  province , it  has  more  than  300  years  historical .
Located  here  many  traditional  buildings , They  construction  the  new  urban  place  from  these  ancient
architectural  nearly  15  kilometers . Coincidental , they  efforts  to  protect  the  natural  emvironment  so  that
these  ancient  architectural  to  avoid  the  damage . These  cultural  heritage  as  a  tourism  resource  of  this
small  town . Every  year  many  visitors  to  the  here  for  sightseeing . Local  people  obtain  benefit  attribute
they  preserved  these  ancient  buildings .

  On  the  other  hand , preserved  historic  buildings  will  increasced  modern  urban  charm . My  friend  Karl  liv
-e  in  Beijing , the  city  is  China  that  has  more  than  5000  years  of  history  of  this  country's  capital . In  
this  city  there  are  located  many  ancient  buildings , such  as  the  Nation  palace  and  Temlp  of  Heaven .
Concurrent , Beijing  also  have  so  many  modern  buildings , there  is  not  only  a  ancient  big  city ,but  also  
is  a  modern  metropolis . Nevertheless , this  ancient  city  efficiently  to  perserved  these  ancient  architectural
. Karl  and  other  Beijing  residents , likes  treamve  these  cultural  heritage . Karl  liked  to  visit  the  National
palace  Museum , and  take  a  walk  at  the  Temple  of  Heaven . Protect  ancient  architecture  encourage  Beiji
ng  has  more  charisma , traditional  culture  impel  this  metroplis  more  beautiful .

  In  brief , traditional  architecture  is  precious  heritage , preserved  historic  building  will  has  constructive  
significantly . City  should  try  preserve  its  historic  building .

[size=13.5pt][font=Times New Roman]Recently, there is a controversial issue about whether to build more modern buildings instead of old building or not. Some people hold the idea of destroying the historic building in our city, they believe that these tradition buildings are not as useful as newly technology buildings and are not in accord with industrialized city image. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who argue that historic buildings are just what we need to protect. From my point of view, I will agree that later one is more reasonable.[/font][/size]
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[size=13.5pt][font=Times New Roman]One of the primary causes is historic buildings keep record of the different developments and changes of a city. One famous person ever said:[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=13.5pt]“[/size][/font][size=13.5pt][font=Times New Roman]every building has its own memory.” I am strongly impressed by this sentence. My old grandmother always reminds of her childhood and told me the stories that happened long long time ago when she saw the familiar buildings. This case is not rare, in reality, frequently the majority of old buildings will tell every person every unique city story with its own language. Therefore, we should cherish this memory and protect our precious old architectures. [/font][/size]
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[size=13.5pt][font=Times New Roman]Moreover, some valuable historic buildings, to some degree, will attract tourists from all over the world and accelerate the development of local economics. Take Paris France as an example, it is well known to all that there are a large amount of fantastic historic buildings in France like Eiffel Tower, Palais Garnier. Hundreds of thousands tourists fall in love with romantic Paris because of its gorgeous and charming historic architectures. Owing to this old buildings, traveling business become one of the major pillar industries of Paris. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that the conservation of historic buildings will benefit our city generation. [/font][/size]
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[size=13.5pt][font=Times New Roman]Admittedly, as a proverb says: “one coin has two sides”. It is undoubtedly that there are a couple of advantages of building more modern buildings such as bringing various conveniences to local people, making the city industrialize, but I still think the disadvantage are more obvious, because nobody would like to admit that the memory of the city should be wiped away. [/font][/size]
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[size=13.5pt][font=Times New Roman]In conclusion, taking account of all these factors and recognizing the fact, we may find out that the benefit of protect the historic building outweigh destroy it. Therefore, from what has been discussed above, we may safely come to conclusion that choosing conservation of historic building is a rather wise decision.[/font][/size]