查看完整版本: 每个人都有自己的作文套路，练习过好多篇，我发现我写的都是一样的。

每个人都有自己的作文套路，练习过好多篇，我发现我写的都是一样的。

写久了，就感觉自己固定了，怎么写都是这样，大同小异，所谓是自己的模板是也。。。

到时候去考试我觉得也就这样了。各位朋友你们说这样好么？

求稳，但是图变与革新是太少了。

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[b][font=Times New Roman]Should the education system aim at general subjects or preparing for careers?[/font][/b]
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[b][font=Times New Roman]Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education.
Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at.
I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.
With regard to my inclination come here reasons hereupon listed.[/font][/b]
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[b][font=Times New Roman]First and foremost, our society needs specialized genius with exponential leaps of economy, political and culture.
We ought to realize that education system served to the society development.
Its function is not only teaches children countless knowledge, but also tell them how to become qualified persons.
Development of society urgently needs bulk of people who acquired special skills to operate, just like that considerable importance of water was attached to fish.
It is imperative for students who devoid of professional abilities that preparing for careers will conducive to make certain contributions to society and nation.[/font][/b]
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[b][font=Times New Roman]The second point to back up my argument that preparing for careers led to a better way to achieve their own profession goals.
As we known, only in obtaining affluent knowledge can we be gather some momentum in profession field.
Then, it is school that our fortunes was taught.
In other word, the schools are dispensable channel leading profession successes.
For instance, as for me, for purpose of my desirable inspiration, I have to bend over my backwards to strive for the hard life. Because I hope that I am capable of providing my parents a comfortable life depend on my own capacity when I grow up. Thus, education system supposed to teach students survival skills in fiercely competition, rather than general subjects which is not apply into application.[/font][/b]
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[b][font=Times New Roman]Further clarify, aiming at preparing for careers will make students learning more profoundly useful stuffs.
By contrast, it is appears that general subjects inferior to those.
The reason is that general subjects just make a elementary introduction to students who can not get valuable information. A survey conducted by Yale University in all over the country reflect that 95% students eager to learn professional knowledge, while 47.5% student hope to reach every corner the academy.
The results of data tell us that education system, which plays an important role for students, may as well put professional knowledge into priority.[/font][/b]
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[b][font=Times New Roman]All in all, through a detailed comparison and what I talked above could we notice the superiority of preparing for careers. The factors what I said boost my confidence to in favor of education system aim at preparing for careers.[/font][/b]
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[font=Times New Roman]我的作文现在都是这个样子。很晕哦。[/font]

society development
----social development

There are some grammatical error as follow:

The second point to back up my argument that preparing for careers led to a better way to achieve their own profession goals.
As we known, only in obtaining affluent knowledge can we be gather some momentum in profession field.
Then, it is school that our fortunes was taught.

使用模板并没什么错，在此基础上提炼语言才是提高写作的实力！！
注意新通知！

谢谢老师