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一篇练习作文 大家恨拍砖啊

There are many resources of news and information in the world, it's difficult to know whom to believe and what is truth. 谈一下你的观点,并写明原因

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That this is era of rapid social and technological change leading to increase the resources of
news and information resulting in the situation that we can hardly pick out the truth seems to be a headache among most of us. Coincident with the majority's opinion is my serious thought that we should cultivate an appropriate ability of judgment and be willing to get help from the professionals.[/font]
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Admittedly, personal judgment is an essential to help us select the truth under the massive amount of information. We must put everything we need into our consideration and think independently in order to absorb the truth and remove the fault even if it comes from an essay of a famous scientist. As the head of physics at my university once said:" If you really want explore this world, you will face so many irrelevant or fallacious information or news that confused most of us. Only through individual's judgment based on careful thought can you find your way out and suspension is vital in this process." Thus it calls for the suspect spirit which is crucial in the personal judgment. Embrace suspicion, love suspicion and use suspicion in our practical way. It is only equipped with this kind of effective weapon that can we make a right judgment and find out where lies truth. History abounds typical examples. William Hamsay, the noble gas pioneer, is the most prominent experts in chemistry. His suspicion of weigh of gas in atmosphere has given rise to the discovery of inert gas, which awards him Nobel Price in 1904. Consequently, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is individual's precise judgment that distinguishes the faults from the truths.
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Furthermore, we are also fully aware that expert's advice aids us greatly in the course of searching the truth. When we encounter within the puzzled situation where we try our best to think carefully but still bog down in the Sargasso Sea of information overload, don't we ever think of seeking assistance from professionals? Definitely, we do. It can be effective and efficient under the help of professionals. For example, when we are discussing about the meaning of entropy in a seminar on physics, people hold various opinions and each sounds reasonable. At this point we may refer to our physical professor and this is obviously a good choice. In contrast, if not, we may waste a long time yet no result. Therefore, the willing to get access to the help from the experts is playing a significant role in selecting authentic information.[/font]
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However, it is far from adequate only with 2 points discussed above. Other means should be added to increase its reliability and efficiency, such as broaden your horizon, use hi-tech and so on.[/font]
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In conclusion, in the vast ocean of information and news, we should cultivate an appropriate ability of personal judgment and be willing to seek assistance for professional in order to find out the truth and remove the fault.
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语言很不错拉，有少许的语法错误，但是不影响整体，具体的我还没太仔细看，稍后奉上，不过字数结构等等都没大问题的~~~

第五行的massive amount of 应该是massive amounts of 吧？
另外，我觉得在举历史例子时那个William Hamsay前用个such as 感觉衔接上会好些，否则感觉有点突兀。
还没看完，不过感觉写的很好，呵呵:) 向你学习

整体感觉很不错啊，句式词汇都还算是蛮丰富的。

个人感觉结尾的地方稍稍不太美国风格。。
像是又开了一个分论点（我以前写一篇英语作文用类似的倒数第二段语气，我们美国老师就这么说。。）
比较中国式。。。

举例如果再详细点更好吧，美国人好像爱直观示例胜过爱哲理。
不过这篇也算是拜读了~

有点跑题，有几个表达方式像Sargasso Sea 可以说得简单点更贴近英文作文

长句的表达在你这里用的很是淋漓尽致。。
THUS是副词，加逗号。

The sentense structures are a little complicated, say Para1.
Overally, it is well written.

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