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住大城市好还是小城市好.

[font=宋体][size=16pt]题目[/size][/font][size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]:Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer?[/font][/size]
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In my childhood, I lived with my grandmother in a small town, but now I am living with my parents in a big city, so I have experienced both styles of life. In my opinion, there are much more advantages living in a big city than in a small town. [/font][/size]
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First of all, as the world develops so rapidly, high efficiency is required in our daily life. Living in a big city is quite a proper means to solve this problem. It is convenient for us to get most we need in our daily life such as appliances, digital products and online services. The advanced transportation can bring us convenient in meeting and communicating. It will save much of our valuable time.[/font][/size]
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Secondly, high quality of education and more opportunities of success are important reasons I choose to live in a big city. In a big city we meet a number of people so that we can always get the latest information of every profession. For our children, schools in big cities usually offer perfect teaching resources such as skilled teachers, laboratories with many functions and various reference books. They may also get more chances to widen their horizons in zoos, shopping malls, and factories. [/font][/size]
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However, living in a small town may be ideal for some people. For ones who don’t need to work so hard, quiet life in a small town may be excellent. They don’t need to face the heavy traffic, they are distant from noises. They meet less people than in big cities in their daily life so they avoided most hustle and bustle. The environment in small towns is often better than in big cities. The air is cleaner and it is more appropriate to do physical exercises. On average, people living in small towns are healthier than those living in big cities.[/font][/size]
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Judging from all the factors we have discussed, I still prefer living in a big city. It can bring me much more facilities than disadvantages. I like the busy life. I get satisfied with my life. Only in busy life can I feel that I am not wasting the time. It is living in a big city that I feel my life is more colorful and diversified.[/font][/size]
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[size=16pt][font=Times New Roman]这样写可以吗,有没有什么致命伤，另外语法上有没有失误？恳请高人指点一二.5月10号就考了……多谢！[/font][/size]

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